Reminders and Reanimation

From the movie adaptation of a seminal text on the importance of education.


Reminder: Final Triptych


Final Triptych

Actually, it’s less a reminder than a reanimator. We’re all a bit dead on our feet by June. There’s more than the course’s final triptych to consider, too.

1. Summer Reading

Read the post covering your 2018 summer assignments. Start the work now, even if you only consider your choices. Your work ethic is going to atrophy by August; you need to exercise it regularly.

Of course, you should only focus on summer reading if you’ve truly finished up everything required of you for this year.

2. Junior-to-Senior Jumpstart

This, too, should only be your concern when and if you handle the rest of your responsibilities, especially in this class. Time will keep on keeping on, though, and in two weeks, you can start to consider some of the bigger stressors of the fall of your senior year:

  1. Asking for letters of recommendation
  2. Drafting the college essay
  3. Completing the Common App
  4. Completing your Junior Autobiography
  5. Organizing an online portfolio of writing, art, etc.

If you can dedicate some time to these over the summer, the fall will be much less stressful.

3. Pareto Projects

The goal was always to grapple with the soritical paradox of most projects and final exams. That’s a way of saying that these projects should involve work you take with you into the summer, into next year, etc., because the work is meaningful. Any arbitrary end date ought to exist to prompt feedback and validation, not to truncate your progress so we can assign it a score.

Share anything you want to share through the Google Classroom assignment created this morning. I’ll populate a Google Site created for this purpose, and we’ll see how much feedback and validation we can gather from the rest of the district and community. Unless you’re a senior (and probably even then), this kind of community feedback will matter as much in July and September as it will next week.

4. Final Essay

The retrospective consideration of your writing life is due on Monday, June 11. Late work affects your profile — of course it does — but it is more important to write meaningfully than to compromise your insight through a last-second rush job.

It’s possible that some of you did not organize your time well over the last three weeks. If so, you should take a few extra days to write this retrospective. Get through the Regents Exam first. Make sure you’ve done what you needed to do for your Pareto Project. Then carve out the necessary time, starting after the Regents Exam on June 12, complete your final essay.

The prompt is in the “Final Triptych” post and on Google Classroom. You should submit your response on Classroom, unless you are using Medium or another site to publish; in that case, you can link directly to your essay.

Note: Some of you negotiated an alternative subject for this final essay. That deal still holds. Submit your response to Google Classroom.

5. THE Regents Exam

By now, you should be deep into this prep. You ought to have finished it, really, since doing a complete practice exam right before taking the real exam is a surefire way to court burnout.

As necessary, the exam posted to Castle Learning is the best use of your remaining time. It has the metacognitive work built in. Load your account and work through the multiple-choice and writing. Refer back to your notes on these posts:

Test Prep: Endgame

Gamesmanship: Regents Exam (CC ELA)

To a significant extent, the Regents Exam reflects your preparation more than your talent for writing, reading, and thinking. Weak work ethic leads to low scores; strong work ethic leads to high scores. If you work hard, even at this late hour, you will do well. The data will tell us your story.

In fact, you might consider everything happening now as another chance to tell a story about yourself. It can be a story of continued investment and insight, of apathy and entitlement, of perseverance and turning points — all narratives stitched together from the choices you’ve already made and the choices you will eventually make. Create something meaningful.

2018 BHS Summer Reading


Brewster High School: Summer Reading (All Students)


Read the assignment below carefully. You can ask questions about this assignment in the comment section of this post.

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AP English Literature & Composition: Summer Reading


For students enrolled in this course for 2018-2019. Contact information for any questions you have included in the assignment.

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DCC English 101: Summer Reading


For students enrolled in this course for 2081-2019. Contact information for any questions you have included in the assignment.

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AP English Language & Composition: Summer Reading


Note that the assigned chapters from The Language of Composition require a BCSD login.

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AP: Stray Observations


Tuesday, May 29


Context

Akrasia, again. We are two weeks away from the end. You need self-control and self-discipline more than ever.

Among your many advantages and resources are systems for instruction, assessment, and feedback that have significant engineering redundancies. You have:

  1. This Course Website | The home of almost all instruction and feedback. This site has copies of all class resources and archives, n reverse chronological order, all lessons and units.
  2. Google Classroom | Also has copies of all posts, handouts, prompts, etc., alongside clear assignment requirements and deadlines. If you get an individual assignments, it’s archived here, too.
  3. Room 210 | With few exceptions, I make photocopies of all posts, handouts, prompts, etc., and stack them around the room. Calendars are everywhere. Outlines and guides are everywhere. I’ve filled our whiteboards with copies of critical information.

I’m present in all of that, as are peer experts who’ve emerged over the year as your most valuable resource. You need all of it to handle the end of the year:

Final Triptych

This is good work, and work worth doing. But it’s still work. It requires an investment from you. It requires vigilance. Today, with the AP exam well behind us and the year almost over, you had a chance to showcase your strengths.


Last(ing) Impressions


Watching the Tides Roll Away

Today, I spent P2 and P9 observing you. I didn’t build you any new instruction, and I didn’t conference with any individual. I didn’t circulate to answer questions, and I didn’t prompt you for updates. I just watched and took notes.

There’s a corollary to Heisenberg’s uncertainty principle in this. The act of silently observing your behavior tends to change your behavior, so that you work harder while under a more watchful eye.

Today, though — today, you could not settle. It happened in the morning, and it happened in the afternoon. Too many of you wasted time, or your time was spent on something other than this class.

You were asked a question on Google Classroom about the impression you think you left; Q4B profile scores were posted at 2:30 PM as a complement to this post1; and you should now read the observations and insights below carefully, with the intention of correcting your lapses and the lapses of others.

(1) There is no more post-exam letdown. That post-exam exhaustion is real, but it doesn’t last weeks. You’ve had a grace period. Now it’s a question of self-discipline and self-control. And there’s nothing personal in that assessment; like the rest of these notes, it just is. This is what some of you demonstrate.

(2) Infinite Campus is an addiction. I observed students who tabbed back to an open Infinite Campus folder every five minutes. Others spent fifteen uninterrupted minutes going through grades. This is disruptive to you, and it’s disrespectful to the space. You do not need to monitor your Infinite Campus grades in real time; at most, you need to check them at home, when your teachers have had a day to enter updates. And I would guess that the correlation between obsessively checking Infinite Campus and lower scores is fairly strong.

(3) Posts are meant to be read at home. When you leave instructional posts for class time, you cannot work with me or others on assignments. This is wasted time. The purpose of flipped instruction is to maximize the work you do in the space; it would be like reading an assigned novel during class discussion, and it is no less disrespectful to the intention of the course. If you keep that habit into next year, it won’t result in this kind of feedback; it will result in lost points and failure.

(4) Yearbooks don’t belong in class. This is unique to the end of the year, but there is always something similar encroaching on our space. In this case, signing a yearbook in the middle of a lesson is inappropriate and disrespectful. If you absolutely will never again have the opportunity to sign that person’s yearbook, let me know, because I assume there are some dire circumstances in play. Otherwise, be respectful, except maybe at the very end of the period.

(5) Traditional work can’t be all that motivates you. P9 had the tone exercises assigned here, and P9 was far more focused than P2. Traditional multiple-choice assessments with traditional feedback trigger the right work ethic. You need to develop a motivational approach for nontraditional work, though, because that’s what you’ll have in college and beyond.

(6) Watch your language. In P2, despite me hovering in a very noticeable pink shirt some ten feet away, one of you launched into a diatribe about “[how] that guy is an ***hole.” In P9, despite me hovering nearby in the same noticeable pink shirt, one of you animatedly told a story with some profane dialogue (“Clean your **** up, god**** it!”). That’s inappropriate, of course, and it’s disrespectful. But it’s also a failure to code-switch and approach a college-level classroom with the right intelligence.

(7) Think about changing seats. There is a teacher station in here, and it’s located in one corner of the room. Other than this station, everything is modular. Move the furniture around. Change your seats. It doesn’t matter that we only have ten days left. And what’s really interesting about taking a closer look at where you sit is this: The most productive group in P9 sits at the same table as the least productive group in P2, and that table is as far away from the door and the teacher station as possible. You can be focused anywhere.

(8) If you’re going to do other work, advocate for that opportunity. I’d rather give you permission to rush through an outline than have you sneak it into our class period. It’s an opportunity for introspection, and it honors the stress you’re under, even if that stress is often self-induced. For the most part, though, doing homework or projects for another class is disrespectful. So is planning for college and everything else in that vein. Ask for permission. That’s an opportunity for feedback. When you don’t ask, the feedback changes tone and impact, and that’s a shame for both of us.

More Feedback

Watch Google Classroom for individual and group assignments related to today’s observations. Use the space here to ask questions and offer your own insight, and make sure you are focused tomorrow. We’re going to look into your writing life retrospectives, among other things, and that means you need to have given some thought to the prompt.

Make the right kind of impression over the next two weeks. Like every choice you make, this matters.


  1. The correlation between those scores and your choices today is strong, as you’d expect. It makes sense to dovetail the two instances of feedback. 

How to Self-Direct


Trial and Error


This is an example of how to self-direct, which does not mean to go it alone. It means, instead, that you are active in your learning. You might need help with each step below, and most steps are more effective with expert guidance and feedback.

Situation:

As part of the end of the year, you’ve been assigned a practice Regents Exam in English. The exam is posted to Castle Learning, so you start there with the multiple-choice questions on reading passages. For this example, we’re sticking with that Part 1.

Steps:
  1. Assess Your Performance | First, you finish the assignment and note your score. You set aside any questions you missed or had difficulty answering, regardless of score. Castle Learning does this automatically; otherwise, you would seek an expert.
  2. Diagnose Greatest Need(s) | Castle Learning provides the correct answer and its explanation for each question. With an expert’s help, you can identify patterns and diagnose needs. In this example (which is drawn from a real-life example), there are two patterns: authorial tone and figurative language.
  3. Peruse Available Resources | You’ll always have resources available in the classroom or online, and usually both. In this case, we can search Google for help identifying tone. I’ve embedded a screenshot of the results below. Then we look carefully through these results for what will help us meet your needs.
  4. Practice and (Self-)Assess | The second link in this example gives you an online exercise. Luckily, it also gives you the correct answers and an explanation, just like Castle Learning. This is an excellent autodidactic resource. In other instances, you can rely on an expert to give you the assignments and any necessary feedback.
  5. R.E.M. | Let’s see if this works as an acronym: reflect on your process; explicate the correct answers, model writing, central skills, etc.; and metacogitate on your learning. This is the key, because the goal is improvement, not just an increase in quantitative success. In other words, this is where you make the learning permanent, regardless of score.

Here is a screenshot of what you would see in this example for Step #3:

The first link is a PDF, and it would be an effective exercise for anyone looking to improve their ability to identify tone. It would require an expert’s help to score, though, which is why that second link is the real find: an interactive, automatically scored exercise. It’s short enough to do quickly, but the explanations are thorough enough to fuel effective metacognition.

What’s even more helpful is that this website has more exercises related to this Regents prep. The first one is on identifying tone:

But you would also find, with a simple bit of searching, an exercise on figurative language:

Five questions each, with explanations for each question. The exercises are scored online automatically. It’s the best kind of resource, and it happens to fit our example perfectly — and remember, this example comes from a real student. With a resource like this, you can much more easily get through the three parts of that final step.

Step #5: R.E.M. (Reflect, Explicate, Metacogitate)
  1. Reflect on the process. The better you get at searching online, the better your resources will be. You also need to codify a system for evaluating resources quickly. It took me about five minutes to find that website for the student who needed help with figurative language and tone. You can find expert resources just as fast, if you practice.
  2. Explicate the results. Explicate means to give a detailed explanation, but its root is more helpful here: It means to unfold or unravel. You need to unfold any feedback you get, whether it’s automatically generated by a site or provided in person by an expert. Imagine that you are laying that understanding out in front of you.
  3. Metacogitate about the learning. You can also think of it as being metacognitive, but then you lose the awkward verb and the “R.E.M.” acronym. Anyway, this is the key: understanding your learning choices, cognitive strengths and weaknesses, etc., in the context of improvement.

As I said, it’s possible to find exceptional resources in only a few minutes. That’s the potential of Google (or any other search engine). You’ll also have plenty of resources provided in class, from textbook lessons on grammar to printed self-assessment forms. It’s about resource management, really — repeated trial and error with the help of peers and other experts.

Ask questions about this post below.

Regents Prep: 5 to Go


P1 Update


You are scheduled to meet five more times before the end of the year. You fall into one of the following three groups.

Juniors taking the exam on June 12

You are most likely preparing for this exam in your core English class. You should, therefore, coordinate with me to make sure we reinforce that work with appropriate elements from the practice exam assigned in mid-May. You should also read the following post:

Gamesmanship: Regents Exam (CC ELA)

The weird picture is of a blobfish. It’s part of an equally weird metaphor about the pressure of high-stakes tests. Anyway, the post crunches the numbers for the Regents Exam, offering you a look at what you’d need on each section to pass or score distinction.

Seniors taking the exam on June 12

You need to complete the practice exam assigned to you as soon as possible. We’ll review your performance as you go. Like the juniors, you might benefit from reading that post on gamesmanship. You might have different goals in terms of the score, but you all need to pass.

Students not taking the English Regents Exam

You stayed on the roster to prepare for another exam. Use the next five meetings to do practice tests through Castle Learning, seek tutoring, which I will help you set up; or to quiz yourself, if the exam is content driven. I’ll be here to help.

Ask any questions about the exam below.

Until We Get It Right


For Students in Regents English 11


You were assigned a practice Regents Exam on April 30. The instructional post was up on April 29.

The deadline for Part 1 was May 4. Part 2 and Part 3 were due a week later, on May 11. You had ten days to finish a three-hour exam, revise 1.5 essays1, and write two paragraphs of metacognitive analysis.

On May 11, you got this post, which gave you more time to finish. On May 14, you were given another extension.

Last week’s terrible storm disrupted our in-class plans, but for this exam-related work, it just meant another extension of the deadline. Friday and Monday were given over not to what we’d planned, but to completing these revisions, etc., and you had, as you always have, the option to do the work in almost any way you chose:

  1. You could handwrite all of it, including the revisions.
  2. You could type the revisions and metacognitive responses in Google Docs and share them.
  3. You could copy your writing into the Google Forms provided in that April 29 post.

#3 was encouraged, because it’s the easiest way for your two teachers to organize small-group instruction. You’ll remember that we discussed that in class, and our discussion was archived as part of this post on May 14. You always have a choice, though.

Here is a copy of what we wrote on the board on Tuesday, May 22, after dedicating another class period to these practice Regents Exams:

You can suss out what that tells us. Here is the profile for a GAP score of 5+, for reference:

“Overall, however, their successes outnumber their flaws.” After three weeks, only three students could argue that claim, and only one could argue for a profile above a 5+.


Until We Get It Right


Why did this systemic lapse happen? Well, Regents Exam prep is boring. It’s repetitive. Given the choice between gossip and an essay on algae, most of us will gossip. If the choice is between social media and literary analysis, even someone like me is going to install Instagram2.

It’s understandable, if not justifiable, that so many of you have dragged your feet like a victim of the Wendigo. You need self-control and focus, though, to make it beyond this year, and this is now an opportunity to develop some of that.

That’s the motivation: Do it until it’s right, and then we’re done. For some of you, that’ll require the Castle Learning practice exam that was outlined earlier this week, but even that will be quasi-optional. We won’t know until you finish what was assigned on April 29.

And the remarkable thing is that some of you will still see an 80 or higher, despite missing the only assignments posted over the last three weeks, because the work needs to be done. There is extraordinary flexibility built into grade abatement. And, again, the only way for us to run the triage outlined in this post about the end of the year is to see what you can do.

Which means that if you do this work, in full, with a complete revision and a significantly developed metacognitive response, we will bend space and time and say that this somehow counts for the GAP period between April 30 and May 18. It will count for the score you receive for Q4B.

Now, it only counts if your metacognitive analysis is longer than a sentence or two, and you must either copy the essay by hand in its entirely or type it through Google Drive or Google Forms (or both). Give your teachers a chance to give you feedback. Let us work out what you need to do next.

Ask questions below, too, if you have any. For now, Infinite Campus won’t have anything for Q4B. Very soon, that will change. It’s up to you what that change will be.


  1. Remember, this is the exam that stipulates, in Part 3, a response of two or three paragraphs, not an entire essay. 

  2. I’m not going to install Instagram. 

Gamesmanship: AP English Lang. & Comp. Exam


Gaming the AP Exam, Part ∞


We’ve talked a lot this year about how to approach your AP exam — the first full post on the matter was five months ago — and you’ve now had an extra week to prep. You should be generating plenty of evidence of your preparations. The last thing to add might be this: a bit of number-crunching à la today’s post on the Regents Exam.

You have copies of the scoring rubrics, worksheets, etc., from the work that started on April 29. You also have had access to this site:

http://appass.com/calculators/englishlanguage

That site runs the numbers for you. It makes gamesmanship far easier. What I’d like to do is give you advice about how to massage your confidence and troubleshoot your last-minute preparations through that site and the other scoring materials you have.


By the Numbers


This the benchmark I’d use:

Why use a 5? Because it’s actually not that far off from the middle of the bell curve:

Any student with a bit of natural ability who works hard all year in our course is capable of this. It’s at the high end of that middle part of the curve, but you have to think of it in qualitative terms: You’re getting about three-fourths of the multiple-choice correct, and you’re writing three adequate essays. That’s what the rubric tells you: 6 means an adequate response.

What we’ll look at here is how the scoring composite shifts if you average other scores across your three essays, and how many multiple-choice answers you’d need correct to cross the threshold for a 3, 4, or 5.

All 6s

Set the number of correct answers on Section I as the first variable, X, and the final AP exam score as the second variable, Y. If you average a 6 across all three essays, Section I breaks down like this:

  • When X ≥ 16, Y ≥ 3
  • When X ≥ 31, Y ≥ 4
  • When X ≥ 42, Y = 5

What’s remarkable, then, about pulling together three adequate responses is that you will pass with just 30% correct on Section I. If you write two adequate responses, but the third is a 7, then the thresholds drop by two points each:

  • When X ≥ 14, Y ≥ 3
  • When X ≥ 29, Y ≥ 4
  • When X ≥ 40, Y = 5
All 5s

It’s more likely that you’ll write at least one uneven response — one that has flaws, but manages to answer the prompt to some extent. You are capable of more, but time and the vagaries of the testing environment might conspire against you. (You might not have prepared as much as you could have this year, too, but that’s a self-imposed handicap.) If you average a 5 across all three essays, Section I breaks down like this:

  • When X ≥ 24, Y ≥ 3
  • When X ≥ 39, Y ≥ 4
  • When X ≥ 50, Y = 5

50+ on Section I is hard to predict, even for the strongest among you. What’s more helpful is that 75% of you were scoring at or above 39 as we practiced Section I, so 75% of you could set your goal at a 4 overall. And what might be most helpful is that you can miss half of the multiple-choice and still look to pass, if your essays are at the level of a 5 or higher.

if you manage one adequate response with two 5s, the thresholds drop by three points:

  • When X ≥ 21, Y ≥ 3
  • When X ≥ 36, Y ≥ 4
  • When X ≥ 47, Y = 5
All 4s

Essays at this level, as you know, fail to answer the prompt adequately. Each and every student reading this right now is capable of a timed essay better than a 4, but it’s also likely and fine that some of you will write a response at this level on the actual exam. Time, pressure, anxiety, etc., all warp the performance. Even if you averaged a 4 on all three essays, however, you’d have a good chance to pass. Section I would break down like this:

  • When X ≥ 31, Y ≥ 3
  • When X ≥ 46, Y = 4

You can’t earn a 5 if your essays are all 4s, but getting 56% of the multiple-choice correct would be enough for you to pass. That’s reassuring, or at least should be, because every single one of you who recorded your practice Section I data were at 32 or higher.

All 3s

You know that essays at this tier are highly flawed. If you’ve done your work this year, you’re unlikely to write a 3, even under time constraints; even if you’ve neglected a lot of the prep, you’d need to make a series of mistakes and miscalculations to end up here.

With all 3s, it’s still possible to pass. You’d need 40+ correct on Section I. You could get a 4, if you were perfect or nearly perfect (53+), but it matters most that you know a 3 is possible.

As you settle in on the day of the exam to work your way through Section I and Section II, keep all this in mind. You have the scoring guidelines for the 2017 exam (and might be able to access a copy of them through this link at the College Board’s website), so you should already have studied what constitutes the different levels of each essay’s rubric.

More importantly, you’ve been using our course’s scoring mechanisms all year. You know that a 6 is adequate, but not at all flawless; you know that 5s are limited, but have some strengths; you know that 4s fail to meet some basic requirements of the task. There’s a logic to this kind of scale. You can predict, therefore, what your score on Section I needs to be for you to hit your target goals, based on what you are likely to do Section II.

Ask any questions below. We’ll workshop the released free-response questions from last week’s exam tomorrow in class.

Gamesmanship: Regents Exam (CC ELA)


TL;DR


The rest of this post delves into the scoring mechanics of the Regents Exam, but I want to try something else:

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I put together a scoring matrix that lines up total points for Parts 2-3 and total points for Part 1 and indicates the final exam score. No weighted raw scores here, and no breakdown of the math — just a look at how many multiple-choice answers need to be correct for a combined writing score to get you over a particular threshold.

The green section indicates distinction, or 85+; the yellow is for passing scores below 85; and the red covers a group of scores that are within striking range of 65.

For reference, here is a similar matrix for the writing sections:

This shows the weighted raw scores for the writing portions of the test. The numbers in the matrix form the left column of the final exam score PDF.


Gaming the Regents Exam


As we enter the last three weeks of the year, our test prep shifts into a kind of endgame. Here, that means crunching the numbers to see what points you can afford to lose on each part of the Regents Exam. You each have a target goal. Whatever that goal is, the multiple-choice section — the three reading passages and 24 questions on Part 1 — will most directly determine whether you succeed or not.

First, though: It takes close reading, critical thinking, and effective writing to do well on any high-stakes English exam. It is rarely, if ever, a test of content. The preparation for these tests starts, therefore, years before you sit to take them. Every essay, text, and discussion contributes to your prep. Skills are built over time, and a comprehensive test of those skills requires that time to tell us anything meaningful. There’s a reason this is the only Regents Exam that is not technically attached to a course (i.e., it has been taken in the past by sophomores, is sometimes taken by seniors, and could theoretically be taken by very advanced freshmen).

What we’re doing here is separating the gamesmanship of all high-stakes tests from the skill-building required. Like all tests, the Regents Exam is about gaining as many points as possible. You’ve prepped for the skills part of the test since you were in middle school. It helps now to consider the numbers game.

Click for an essay on high-stakes test and grade-abated gamesmanship.


Case Study: January 2018


Almost all of this is available online:

What we need from that site is the equation for generating what is called a weighted raw score, which will then be converted by the state into a score out of 100 points. Let’s call the weighted raw score X.

There are three parts to the Regents Exam. Each one generates a raw score, based either on the number of questions answered correctly (Part 1) or the scores given according to a rubric (Part 2 and Part 3). We can give each of those scores a variable, too:

  • Part 1: Total MC Score = A
  • Part 2: Essay Score = B
  • Part 3: Short Response Score = C

The formula for determining a student’s weighted raw score: A + 4B + 2C = X. Here is the chart for converting that weighted raw score to a scale score out of 100 points:

We can call the 100-point score Y. What we can do now is determine what you’d need, given a particular score on Part 1, to hit the more meaningful thresholds:

  • When X ≥ 31, Y ≥ 65
  • When X ≥ 38, Y ≥ 80
  • When X ≥ 45, Y ≥ 90

This lets us run some interesting scenarios. Perfect scores on the writing would yield a score of 66 without Part 1, for instance, which means a student could get zero points there and still pass. That speaks to the importance of the writing sections. It’s the multiple-choice, however, that allows the most gamesmanship. Consider:

  • You can practice the multiple-choice on your own, because the answers are available online; no one needs to score your work for you.
  • When multiple-choice is assigned through Castle Learning, you get explanations automatically, which means you can focus on metacognition and repetition.
  • It is often difficult to improve an essay from a 4 to a 5; the bell curve puts most responses in the 3-4 range.
  • It is similarly difficult to improve the Part 3 response from a 3 to a 4; the bell curve puts most responses in the 2-3 range.

It is much easier to practice more multiple-choice, work metacognitively through that practice, and pick up a few more points on Part 1. And with that in mind, we can work off of middle scores on the writing section to determine what you’d need on Part 1 to earn a target score.


By the Numbers


Part 2: 3 | Part 3: 2

Together, those writing responses would earn the student 16 points. We need another 15 points to pass, which means the student could miss nine (9) multiple-choice questions and still get there. The rest of the numbers, where A is still the total multiple-choice score for Part 1 and Y is the overall converted score:

  • When A ≥ 15, Y ≥ 65
  • When A ≥ 22, Y ≥ 80

The student would need to miss only two questions on Part 1 to eke out an 80, but 15+ correct is more than possible. The questions are unevenly distributed, so that only four or five will ever be attached to the poem, whereas most exams have ten each per longer prose passage.

More importantly, writing responses that earn a 3 and 2, respectively, would be considered failing. See the rubrics here and here. This is, for most students, the starting point for writing, and many students can expect to do slightly better. For proof, consider the sample essay from Part 2 embedded below. According to the state’s scoring guides, this essay “us[es] some language that is inappropriate or imprecise,” “exhibit[s] frequent errors” that “make comprehension difficult.”

In other words, this sample essay is riddled with errors, and it still gives the student a chance to pass with only 15+ correct responses on Part 1.

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Part 2: 3.5 | Part 3: 2.5

What happens if the student’s two writing responses go up by just 0.5 points each? That barely brings the writing halfway up the rubric, but it earns the student 19 points for Part 1. Now we need only 12 more points to pass, which means the student could get 50% of the multiple-choice section incorrect and still get there. The rest of the numbers, where A is again the total multiple-choice score for Part 1 and Y is the overall converted score:

  • When A ≥ 12, Y ≥ 65
  • When A ≥ 19, Y ≥ 80
  • When A ≥ 22, Y ≥ 85

Again, this is with much weaker responses for Part 2 and Part 3. Getting 15 right on Part 1 would now yield a 72, well above passing. 19 correct is a relatively high bar, but it’s more than possible, and it starts yielding overall scores in the 80s.

Part 2: 4 | Part 3: 3

These writing scores are in the upper-half of the rubrics. They reflect adequate work — nothing stylish or particularly well developed, just adequate. Now, the student earns 22 points for Part 1, which means we need only nine more points to pass. The student could miss 15 multiple-choice questions and still get there. The rest of the numbers, where A is still the total multiple-choice score for Part 1 and Y is the overall converted score:

  • When A ≥ 12, Y ≥ 70
  • When A ≥ 16, Y ≥ 80
  • When A ≥ 19, Y ≥ 85
  • When A ≥ 23, Y ≥ 90

Yes, it would take a nearly perfect score to inch above a 90 overall, but a 90 is not everyone’s goal. An 80 requires this student to get only half of the questions right on Part 1. That’s well within reach. And more effective writing boosts the overall score quickly, as you’d expect.

Part 2: 5 | Part 3: 3

For instance, one more point on Part 2 earns the student 26 points for both writing sections. It takes only five more points to pass, with the following numbers now possible:

  • When A ≥ 12, Y ≥ 80
  • When A ≥ 19, Y ≥ 90
  • When A ≥ 23, Y ≥ 95

It takes skill and focus to earn a high score, which is only natural. The encouraging thing ought to be that there are many paths to success, and each of you can use these last few weeks to practice until you are confident of your path.

Ask questions in the comment section.

Final Triptych

Triptych, 1976 by Francis Bacon

Something to keep in mind: We are always, even on the last day of the year, still making the makerspace, not just using it. We can always learn more about how to use the Humanities to build a better version of ourselves. There will always be meaningful problems to solve and new ways to learn.

On the course calendar, this was the shape of the next and final part of the school year:

That remains a helpful framework — red for collective test prep, green for autonomous makerspace work, and yellow for your Pareto Projects. But you could also set your own schedule. This is not just the last panel of this quarter’s triptych of studies, but a triptych itself, split unevenly between three focuses.


Pareto Projects


From September, when we started these Pareto Projects:

Pareto Project Guide (2017-2018)

This year, you’ve used 20% of your time to work on a project of your choosing. You have set (and often reset) the goals, schedule, parameters, etc., with time in class every week or so to work.

It’s time to showcase what you’ve accomplished. We’ll partner with the high school’s Media Specialist, Mr. Breen, to share some of your work online and in the iLC. We’ll fill the walls and shelves of our classroom. If we can, we’ll spread into other areas of the building. It’s up to you.

In fact, figuring out how to showcase your project is part of the project — a problem to solve, as we would any other problem, through collaboration and experimentation. This moment is about you and what you have created.

There won’t be a Google Classroom assignment for these projects. They are part of your final profile score, though.


Writing Life Retrospective


Meanwhile, you are encouraged to create a writing life retrospective, which is exactly what it says on the tin: a look back at your writing life. The scope and sequence of this retrospective are up to you. The form is up to you. It could be a portfolio of essays and other writings from this year, but I’d encourage you to think bigger.

Whatever your exploration looks like, you need to pull together an essay that bills itself as a retrospective answer to a question about your writing life. That will be the assignment on Google Classroom, available from May 21 on.

The essay should follow Paul Graham’s idea of “err[ing] on the side of the river,” or mining for insight and interesting perspectives. You’ll want to think creatively. Scour old folders in Google Drive, boxes of work your parents have kept, the corners of old Internet haunts — wherever you might gather unique details and meaning.

And think of your writing life as much more than just essays written in school. Your writing includes anything written, from essays to poetry to online posts to the occasional bit of bathroom graffiti. Use it all.

We’ll shape this work as we explore it, same as we will for the Pareto Project showcases. Keep Piet Hein’s idea in mind: “Art is solving problems that cannot be formulated before they have been solved. The shaping of the question is part of the answer.”


Regents Exam Triage


On the other end of the educational spectrum is the Regents Exam, for those of you who must take it on June 12. There is no art to test prep, at least not as Hein or any other creative person would define it. Think of it as triage — self-directed, teacher-assisted triage.

Castle Learning has also been set up for each of you. You’ll need your login information, which I’ll provide in class. Here is the main site:

I’ll help you through the registration process, if you need help. Once you’re registered, you’ll find these five assignments:

  • 8/16 Practice: Part 1 – Passage A
  • 8/16 Practice: Part 1 – Passage B
  • 8/16 Practice: Part 1 – Passage C
  • 8/16 Practice: Part 2
  • 8/16 Practice: Part 3

This practice all comes from the ELA Common Core Regents Exam given in August of 2016. Follow the directions carefully. For each assignment, there is a CR — constructed response — that asks you to be metacognitive about your choices and performance.

These metacognitive constructed responses are essential. They turn cursory work into meaningful work, and they force you to take the test seriously, even if you are burned out on tests.

For each reading passage, the metacognitive prompt in Castle Learning is this:

Use teacher feedback, your peers, and the correct answers that are provided by Castle Learning to engineer an understanding of how these questions and answer choices work. Write metacognitively about the passage, the questions, and your problem-solving efforts.

And for both writing responses, the metacognitive prompt in Castle Learning is this:

Identify and analyze several writing choices you made in this response. You can focus on your use of detail, your arrangement, your central meaning, or your rhetorical manipulation of grammar and style.

All five assignments will be open until June 11 at 11:59 PM. Your overall diligence and effort in preparing will be part of your final profile score, so try not to wait too long to do this.

If you are in P1 English Regents Prep

You have these five assignments already. Your role is that of a proxy teacher: Use your experience and our work in P1 to help your peers. That’s the kind of collaborative work that boosts your profile score, and it’s the best way to continue to improve your own skills.

If you are in AP English Language & Composition

You also have access to the most recent Regents Exam, which was prepared for you here:

Test Prep: Endgame

This one is not on Castle Learning. Copies are in our classroom. You can choose between the two versions of the exam. Both will force you to learn the format of the test, so it’s more a matter of personal preference.

You should also keep in mind that the Common Core ELA Regents Exam is a lot like the AP exam you take. If you’ve prepared well for the latter, the former will feel far easier. Avoid overconfidence, and you’ll be fine.

 

AP11: Silver Linings…

So close…


…From (Literally) Dark Clouds


Well, that was unexpected. Where I live, the storm tore up the trees and knocked out the power for a day, but everyone is safe; I hope you can all say the same.

To Twitter for an update on your AP exam:

May 23 is next Wednesday. Here is the silver lining: You have another week to prepare. You also have another weekend to do the assigned test prep, which is a lucky thing for some of you.

I will adjust the deadlines for anything that posted recently to Google Classroom, so if you see a Friday or weekend deadline, expect that to change. I’ll make sure you all have time in class for GAP reports, since some folks are without power right now.

The TL;DR here, however, is that anyone who didn’t do any part of the assigned test prep over the last two weeks is now expected to make up that work by next Tuesday. That’s a practice test requiring three hours and fifteen minutes, plus data entry, writing revisions, and a bit of metacognition.

About two dozen of you never input your multiple-choice answers. Many of you, whether you wrote responses to the free-response questions or not, never got to the revisions and metacognition.

That’s obviously a poor way to prepare for a high-stakes exam, but it’s also a poor way to build evidence for any sort of profile. Here’s what I have on my end for the GAP period that ends tomorrow, May 18:

That’s lifted from Google Sheets. As always, there’s in-class focus and individualized work to consider, but this is pretty much it: AP exam prep, a couple of quasi-optional responses1, and your end-of-panel GAP reports.

Start by visiting the post from April 29:

Test Prep: Endgame

That is the first thing you see on the main instructional page of this website, and an entire bookshelf in Room 210 was overtaken, like so much Southern kudzu, by physical copies of this stuff. For a couple of weeks now, you have had one goal: Prepare to take down the AP exam on May 16.

So you need to do this prep. You’ve been given another chance, and that will make it much more damning if you do nothing. Here are the other two posts you need to consider, including the one from May 15:

AP11: Penultimate Shifts

Eve of the Exam: Focusing Feedback

Q4B GAP scores will be run for students in AP at some point early next week. Q4A scores will be up tonight. If you are missing any part of the test prep assigned on April 29, you have three or four days to get it done.


About Q4A


Most of you got a massive extension on the start of Q4, because it all had a purpose tied to the exam and the end of the year. Consider:

  • 4x Onomatopoeia Quizzes on Grammar as Rhetoric and Style
  • GARAS Review
  • GARAS: Final Analysis

All of the grammar work was collaborative, open-note, etc., and built to boost your writing and reading on the exam, plus every other exam you take as juniors. Absolutely essential stuff.

  • Pareto Project: Final Goals

This is what we’ll use to set up the last three weeks of the year. Pretty essential, considering it’s been a project since September.

  • GAP Evidence and Formal Self-Assessment

This, too, was essential: An in-class, incremental look at your learning profile for the start of Q4. The form was much more substantial, so that finishing it would almost automatically produce the metacognition and reflection you need.

If you see a GAP score you don’t like, you didn’t do some of that. Make sure you do a little detective work on your own before asking about a profile score.

If you have questions about the rescheduled exam, the test prep, or anything else expected over the next few days, you can ask here or in the comment section of the appropriate post. Hopefully, we’ll see each other tomorrow to talk in person.

Meanwhile:


  1. And that exam debriefing is going to need to be truncated considerably. By the time you get back to class from the AP exam, it will be only three weeks before the end of the year.