On Elision
New words tend to get stuck in my head. After reading Perdido Street Station, it was the word “desultory,” which appears several times in the novel1. The first time I read The Autobiography of Malcolm X, it was “tentacling,” which appears in the “Learning to Read” excerpt sometimes taught in schools. And I got “ineffable” from this strange short story by Ambrose Bierce, where it appears in the last moments of Peyton Farquhar’s surreal experience2.
For two weeks in October of 2017, it was the word “elide” (and its noun form, “elision”), which I encountered in this Deadspin article about the NFL. It means to omit, but it also implies a blurring of separate ideas into one. In that NFL article, it’s used to mean a little of both:
Lockhart went on to say the question of punishment was “a moot point” as it pertains to the Cowboys, since none of their players has protested during the anthem. But this elides the explicit threat Jones made to discipline any players who did. The threat is as pernicious as actively following through on any punishment—and in some cases, just as effective.
The author argues that the explicit threat and actual punishments have been elided. Most of us have encountered that sort of elision. It happens when someone wants to avoid or flatten complicated ideas, or when they are unaware of nuances. It’s a good word for that sliver of human nature.
How To Get Your Mind to Read
When we talk about reading as part of learning, we elide the evolving complexity of the act. I’ve written a lot about it as part of the instructional posts that make up this website. That’s how I’ve worked through my own perspective on reading, since this is the first Humanities makerspace; it’s why this explanation of what we do, written for a wider audience than just students, talks as much about teaching literature as it does about how feedback should work. Under the section called “Rumor Mongering,” the overlap is explicit:
The rumor that I don’t assign/teach/like literature is easy to trace, though, which is important. I teach Paul Graham’s “Age of the Essay,” and I make no secret of how much I agree with his conclusions. I also agree with John Holt’s idea of what makes children hate reading. I don’t think their perspectives negate the teaching of literature, but they are complex and uncomfortable ideas that challenge long-held assumptions about English Language Arts. They force us to talk about resonance and efficacy and technology and neuroplasticity, among many other elements. It’s far simpler to build a straw man — or an English kind of Scotsman — than to grapple with, e.g., Graham’s logic, which forced me many years ago to realize that a syllabus in the Humanities might need to look different.
(It might also be worth a moment’s consideration that the straw man built from my desire to teach literature differently doesn’t really match up with, you know, the guy who was interviewed in Harper’s.)
Reading doesn’t just mean reading novels, just like writing doesn’t just mean writing essays. That elides the nuances of the most nuanced skills we have as human beings: how to communicate our experiences with each other. And while we can see, in Common Core and other systems approaches, the push toward that perspective, we still seem to talk most often about what books we read. When I say to people, inside and outside of the teaching profession, that I teach English, that’s the first question: “What books do you teach?” When a new administration arrives, that’s the first question: “What books do you teach?” At parent-teacher conferences, parents lead with their own memories of reading The Catcher in the Rye — or not reading it, actually, since that’s more often the case.
Here’s why the complexities matter:
That pieces, published in 2017 in The New York Times, argues that we might be neglecting an important element of reading in traditional education:
All prose has factual gaps that must be filled by the reader. Consider “I promised not to play with it, but Mom still wouldn’t let me bring my Rubik’s Cube to the library.” The author has omitted three facts vital to comprehension: you must be quiet in a library; Rubik’s Cubes make noise; kids don’t resist tempting toys very well. If you don’t know these facts, you might understand the literal meaning of the sentence, but you’ll miss why Mom forbade the toy in the library.
Knowledge also provides context. For example, the literal meaning of last year’s celebrated fake-news headline, “Pope Francis Shocks World, Endorses Donald Trump for President,” is unambiguous — no gap-filling is needed. But the sentence carries a different implication if you know anything about the public (and private) positions of the men involved, or you’re aware that no pope has ever endorsed a presidential candidate.
To learn to read, you need to read more than novels. You need to read widely and frequently on many different subjects, because that develops the contextual knowledge necessary for understanding. It’s a content-dependent skill. Decontextualizing the skill damages the skill, and I agree with the author that “the systematic building of knowledge must be a priority in curriculum design.” It’s not enough to study the skill of reading; you have to ask students to read a lot, too.
That’s why a post on this instructional site might ask you to read about Möbius strips and Thelonious Monk. It’s not random or arbitrary; it’s an attempt to expose you, while you read instruction and feedback, to a wide range of ideas and texts. More than that, it’s an attempt to send you off to read the Times, New York Magazine, and sites like Deadspin. That’s how you build the necessary framework to read at all — the “hooks” that Paul Graham talks about, the ones that help you gain knowledge at an exponential rate.
Dilapidated Rooftops
You should, of course, read novels like 1984 and The Catcher in the Rye. I really cannot shout any more loudly from these dilapidated rooftops that literature is the best way to develop empathy, and that empathy is the most important skill. Sophomores almost always read Shakespeare and Bradbury. Juniors almost always read Orwell and Salinger. (We try to read some non-white, non-male literature, too, since we can’t just study dead white men. But dead white guys make up a lot of the canon.)
To be more precise about it, those books are almost always assigned. Whether you read them or not depends on such a wide range of factors that only by testing and quizzing could I hope to hold you accountable. Reading the novel to you might work, but that’s no longer about you reading; it’s now about you listening, and even then, how could I peer into your head and determine if you’re engaged? I’d still have to give you reading quizzes, homework checks, etc., until “reading” turns into a nightmare of forced compliance. That is why so few Americans leave high school wanting to read, as that Times article argues, but it’s more depressingly why teachers lie to themselves about what works.
“How to Get Your Mind to Read” is also an example of why you find so many hyperlinks in an instructional post like this. I built the idea of interstitial teaching around the Internet, which was never my first instinct as a teacher; it’s the way of the world, however, whatever my romanticized and outdated notions of the Humanities might have been. The Times uses hyperlinks, because hyperlinks have replaced the Works Cited page, the parenthetical citation, and, most importantly, this concept:
You might think, then, that authors should include all the information needed to understand what they write. Just tell us that libraries are quiet. But those details would make prose long and tedious for readers who already know the information. “Write for your audience” means, in part, gambling on what they know.
Ah, but Willingham provides hyperlinks because he can’t gamble anymore on what a reader knows. The audience is too broad, too diverse, and often too uninformed, even for a piece in the Times. He has to link, again and again, to what he’s referencing. There are six links in his short article. In an edition of the Times from 20 years ago, there would be none, and not just because the Internet was in its infancy. The audience would have been expected to know what the author meant, or to head off to a library to find out.
Hyperlinks break down that informational barrier, but using hyperlinks is a skill you have to be taught: how to organize open tabs, what to pay attention to, how many branches to follow in an increasingly ramiform essay or post. That’s why I put a dozen or more links in each post. It invites students to practice a critical and rarely taught kind of reading.
One important note: I’m not quizzing or testing you, so the expectation isn’t that you click every single link, read every single linked text, and somehow internalize all of it; it’s that you develop the habit of mind to follow the connections between ideas and to chase down the informational context you lack.
You can fill in those gaps, after all, whether the hyperlink is provided or not. I linked to “An Occurrence at Owl Street Bridge” at the start of this post, both to invite you to read it (it’s a seminal piece of American literature) and as the source of the word “ineffable” in my vocabulary. But I didn’t link to a definition of the word. You can do that yourself. It takes seconds to right-click a word, search Google, and find a workable definition. There are extensions in most browsers that speed up the process even more.
It takes slightly longer to find the context necessary for a concept that doesn’t have a simple definition — the concept of umwelt, for instance, which has sometimes made its way into the calendars for this course. Use Google, read Wikipedia, look at the word’s use on a popular webcomic. Now you have knowledge about psychology and programming and Internet humor that you lacked 20 minutes before.
It’s not just the Times that wants you to read this way. The world does, in the sense that discourse happens now interstitially and online. Global connectivity means that you need a lot of knowledge in order to understand what you read. Tony Wagner wrote about it as part of innovation — in a book called Creating Innovators, which is often assigned to educators — in a “Letter to a Young Innovator”:
Become an anthropologist to better understand the economic, social, and cultural influences that promote or inhibit the changes you are trying to make. Read history and good novels to understand culture and character. Ask lots of questions, and observe carefully.
That’s exactly it: Novels teach us history and culture and character, but you need to be an anthropologist to understand why all that stuff matters. You need knowledge. You need to be a polymath. And that means reading everything.
Reading to Learn: Interstitial Instruction
In one of the opening-day letters I send to students and parents, there is a nested articulation of this idea. It is worth copying over some of that letter here to illustrate further why reading in this particular way matters so much.
The following quotation comes from the Head of School at Wooster:
[S]creens and the internet are causing us all to slowly lose the ability to do what is called “deep reading.” In the meantime, I’m going to keep asking you all to give me your attention in this way: Reading deeply, and then thinking deeply and reflecting. Questions are a part of the process too, and I am happy to answer them at any time. Even if you don’t agree with the content, or it makes you slightly uncomfortable, just the act of giving it your attention, and thinking deeply about it, is good for your brain. In this age of distraction and sound bites, it gives me great joy to help our community members retain and strengthen the gift of deeper reading.
This is the crux of why I go to such lengths to flip instruction in this particular fashion. We’ve known for a long time now that the Internet is shallowing our brains — Nicholas Carr’s The Shallows is one of the best journalistic books on the subject — but I want to suggest that the problem is in how we use the Internet, not the Internet itself. I also believe we all need help “retain[ing] and strengthen[ing] the gift of deeper reading.” As Mr. Byrnes put it: “[J]ust the act of giving it your attention, and thinking deeply about it, is good for your brain.”
This is why I write to students. Put simply, it’s good for your brains to read this sort of thing, even if it makes you uncomfortable and takes some time. It’s the counterpart to the work we put into, say, Hamlet, or the work we’ll do peer-editing college essays. The mental muscles for each type of reading are connected, but they are distinct. They all need strengthening.
As Mr. Byrnes puts it, I hope to push back against “distraction and sound bites” — to force all of us to look more deliberately and carefully at student learning than the usual online gradebook invites us to. That’s why the district has invested so heavily in providing education through technology — not just to weather the pandemic, but because this is the way discourse now functions. We must try to elevate that discourse while strengthening our own focus.
It appears to have been a favorite of China Miéville. His book of short stories, Looking for Jake, is in our classroom, if you find yourself interested in his work. There’s a reason they call it weird fiction, though; be prepared for some very strange ideas. ↩
The twist ending of this story is emulated fairly often in fiction of all kinds. There is also a movie version that won an Academy Award that we sometimes watch in this classroom. ↩
From clicking the link on the word “bibliophage” and referencing the etymological section, I saw that “bibliophage” comes from “book” and “eat”. I found that this is actually a fair expression of what it means to be a person who loves to read. Reading is nourishing your mind; it’s the best way to accumulate knowledge and build a broad base of knowledge, just as eating is nourishing your body and makes you stronger. In fact, I had a conversation with Mr. Eure and some of my peers today about how reading curiously about things that fascinate us but that we don’t understand is one of the most effective uses of our time- because it transforms us into polymaths who are more capable of understanding the world around them.
Regarding the “How to Get Your Mind to Read” article, I agreed with what the author said about reading comprehension test scores correlating to knowledge on the topic. While doing standardized test practices, I find that the most challenging passages tend to be ones with unfamiliar concepts and terms relating to atypical fields of study, inventions or historical events.
I strongly agreed with one part of the “How to Get Your Mind to Read Article”, the one that suggests that we spend early education focused too heavily on reading comprehension instead of building base knowledge. I remember learning very little science and social studies in elementary school and I would have defined reading comprehension as a skill that was transferrable anywhere. I completely identify with what the author is saying about giving students knowledge that will help them understand texts, especially considering the extent to which knowledge of the subject can be even more useful than strong reading skills. If we don’t have a context in which to fit a piece that we are reading, how can reading it be useful to us? If giving students a basic, well-rounded knowledge will make it easier for them to form hooks when they’re reading, why aren’t we revising our old model of elementary education?
I have personally always loved reading and found it to be very important. Reading helps you become a better writer, understand others, and learn about whatever you want to learn about really. I feel as though a lot of my natural instincts as a writer come from reading so much from a young age. When talking to Mr. Eure today about a piece I wrote I realized that I made many effective choices to create an certain feeling, yet I didn’t know what these choices were called and I wasn’t exactly conscious about these choices while I was writing- they just kind of flowed out at as I was writing. If you’re (or at any point were) a big reader I think it would be worth it to look at how it has affected your writing.
The best way to write is to just let it flow. (@ the river metaphor in Age of the Essay). It’s also always interesting to look back and see you’ve been using certain literary devices you’ve never heard the actual names for. I think reading also improves your writing abilities, and you don’t always have to think about it..it kind of just happens the more you read.
I agree with Erin about how reading a lot transforms your writing. I also identify with what Erin said about how not knowing the name of a rhetorical device never really dampens its effectiveness. If there’s anything I’ve learned these past few weeks with the Alligators of the Mind Guided Reading, it’s that we have to see those devices used in a lot of places before we can see them in different contexts and internalize them granularly- that is, in a way that enables us to reuse those devices in our own work as well.
I could not agree more with Erin and Jane… reading is essential to improving your writing. If you try to write without reading, you won’t know how to do it correctly because you will have no idea what your writing should sound like. Hearing the way famous and professional authors phrase their ideas gives your mind an outline for how words and sentences can be strung together in an effective and appealing way. I also find that reading a lot has caused me to notice grammatical errors everywhere, especially when someone is speaking. When I hear people use the word “good” when they should’ve said “well”, I want to rip my hair out!
I agree with Victor in that reading comprehension test scores greatly correlate with one’s knowledge on the topic. However when I was thinking about that, I realized that it is in fact those reading comprehension tests/quizzes/etc. that discourage people from reading. Which is why I feel that although the reading comprehension checks are necessary, they should be kept to the bare minimum, in order to make sure the student is understanding and reading the book, as the challenging parts of the assessment may drive the student further and further away from wanting to read.
Regarding the post on “why teachers lie to themselves about what works,” I found it interesting that the teacher that was hard on herself and tried to better her wrongs was fired but the teachers that would lie and say that their students were learning exquisitely were not fired. How come when a teacher sees the bad in their teaching and only wants to fix that so that their students can be better, brighter, and more creative are not rewarded but instead fired, while the teachers that see all their wrongs but chose to avoid them and stretch the truth on how well they are doing, are keep around? Don’t we want what’s best for the students so they can learn and take the knowledge they learn towards the future and not be forced to plagiarize and forge work that didn’t do?
I’ve been mulling this over for the better part of a week. The article you read — and it’s great that you’re chasing down ramiform links — brings up the conflict between authenticity and performance. Often the latter is judged in a way that hinders the former. I think you face it as students just as often as any adult does.
The question I have is this: Is it worth the risk to be honest about struggling? I think it is. But we all have to keep asking the question.
When reading the post, “How to Get Your Mind to Read,” the piece about writing particularly for the intended audience stood out to me. I think it reveals that the purpose of writing is “gambling on what they know,” they, being the readers. When I think about the truth to this, it makes so much sense. I’ve read pieces and not understood them because there was information that the writer didn’t include. They assumed I already knew it. That could be my lack of knowledge, but it could also be the authors lack of inclusion of information. The soccer experiment on the third graders is a perfect example of this. A child that knows a lot about soccer but is not the best reader has a great advantage over a child that doesn’t know much about soccer but reads at a higher level. The mere fact that the student recognizes more about soccer, shows that understanding and making inferences about the material is more important than being able to read well overall. What is there to do to increase comprehension of material? Does that just come with common knowledge or is there something to do now that can improve the chances of recognizing and understanding the material?
This is an incredibly helpful comment. Yes, there are things you can do, but they take a lot of time: reading the classics, reading the newspaper every day, studying history on your own. I think the Internet allows us to fill in the gaps more quickly, but also more haphazardly. Click on links, get lost a little bit, and see what sticks with you. You can only fill in the gaps in your cultural currency by paying attention to what you don’t know.
Whenever I look back on my life I usually can look at myself at one point of the last couple of years with at least a book in my hand. However nowadays I do not read as much as I did when I was 6,7,8 years old. After looking at some of the books that have been talked about in the course so far they are intriguing me to pick them up and read them through. Is there any way to find the time to read more and more?
It’s not easy. At least, I haven’t found it to be easy, and most students agree that their time is at a premium. My advice is to read before going to sleep, even if it’s only a few moments a day. It might take you a few months to finish a book, but you’ll have that habit.
More practically, I can help you find time to read in class. You couldn’t do it every day, but you could certainly take a day here and there to read silently. We have quieter corners of the room. There is also the iLC. Because you could reflect on the efficacy of that sort of focused period of reading, it would fit our skills, traits, and profiles.
Reading is something that you can’t just stop doing. It is very important to keep reading incorporated in your life, even if it’s not your typical novel. Is there any way we as a class could share our book findings such as a book swap? For me, when I read and then talk about the book it makes it a lot easier to understand the book or article. Also, this way we can increase reading in and out of the classroom.
Yes, let’s do this. Perhaps we can dedicate a bookshelf to these book recommendations, which could then be folded into discussions in class and online throughout the year.
Reading in school over the years has made it feel like more of a requirement than something I want to do. This is because of what you mentioned early in the post where it talks about how students have to be assessed on the piece of literature they’re reading to understand their level of engagement with the piece. Although, reading is an important skill that helps lead to the development of other skills so I’d hope to find a way to incorporate it into our own classes while being able to enjoy it.