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March 6, 2020

This will be published the afternoon of March 5, with the intention of reading through it together on March 6.

Through the weekend, your focus should be on the following instructional post:

Statements of Purpose

All projects must support a full statement of purpose. There must be an appropriate crux:

  • a puzzling or difficult problem: an unsolved question
  • an essential point requiring resolution or resolving an outcome
  • a main or central feature (as of an argument)

Your statement of purpose should further answer questions like these:

  • Why does this work matter to you?
  • Why might it matter to others?
  • What is the potential message for your audience?
  • What is the potential lesson to be learned?

These criteria are listed in the instructional post on statements of purpose, which has been photocopied for you to annotate in class.

For each project, you must submit a statement of purpose. It can be written before you begin, as you build the project, after you finish, or all of these; and it can help you revise and refine your project as often as you like.

Note: You can finish one project before beginning another, or you can move between projects according to inspiration and in-class needs. You might explore an idea for a while, write a statement of purpose, and then discover you’d like to change entirely — just keep an eye on the calendar.

Each of your statements of purpose must be entered into the appropriate form:

✰ Self-Prescribed Book Project | https://forms.gle/ufPyFt4bPWXsVjtD7
✰ Research-Driven Essay | https://forms.gle/mm2JueFFCRgUmbHQ9
✰ Commencement Address | https://forms.gle/g9RLS4UMRxBHpf5R6
✰ Pareto Project | https://forms.gle/xAxbBp2rwnJVLB1x5
✰ Senior Talk | https://forms.gle/NSpDWj5ijHxWtzYK6

The forms will require you to write 250 characters or more. That is half as long as the following example, which is taken from the instructional post:

[Blame] has an inverse relationship with accountability. Accountability, by definition, is a vulnerable process. It means me calling you and saying, “Hey, my feelings were really hurt about this,” and talking. It’s not blame. Blame is simply a way that we discharge anger. People who blame a lot seldom have the tenacity and grit to hold people accountable, because we spend all of our energy raging for 15 seconds and figuring out whose fault something is. And blaming is very corrosive in relationships. And it’s one of the reasons we miss our opportunities for empathy.

So your own statement must only be about half the length of a normal paragraph. It should furthermore not be much longer than Brown’s statement on blame.

The paragraph must be precise and effective, of course, and we will wordsmith and workshop until it is. These statements support your projects. That’s another reason to use Brown’s excerpt: It’s a reminder to take responsibility for your work this semester. Do not blame others for how your project-based learning unfolds. You must own your choices, including the choice to raise the level of your work.


Project Expectations


Speaking of leveling, review these posts on the line between sufficient and insufficient work:

All of your projects must meet grade-level expectations. The research-driven essay, for example, must reflect the standards detailed in this writing guide: https://tinyurl.com/sisyphus-researches. There are other structures and other model texts you might use, but any individualized approach must reflect the same breadth and depth required by that five-page, eight-step guide.

That means that any research-driven essay must have multiple kinds of evidence from a wide variety of sources. It must use appropriate rhetorical strategies, including appeals to logic, emotion, and ethos. It must be arranged purposefully. And it must, as necessary, cite its sources with accurate MLA formatting and the use of hyperlinks and embedded multimedia.

If you submit a research-driven project that doesn’t meet those expectations, you’ll have to revise it. Depending on your amenability and timing, you may find yourself asked to give up free periods for further feedback. Remember how your choices are tracked and how interventions are triggered.

The Senior Talk also has a guide: https://tinyurl.com/sisyphus-tedx. The seven steps in that guide are required, and your work for each step must meet grade-appropriate expectations. The public presentation or talk is just one element. The research, script, and final reflection are equally important. Think outside the box, but remember that you’re building something; box or not, it has to showcase your own intelligent design.

The default project for your self-prescribed book (or other text) is a reader-response essay, and that, too, has a guide: https://tinyurl.com/maker-readres. Any individually selected project must reflect the same skill and insight required of a reader’s response. Simple exposition — a basic book report, for instance — is insufficient for your grade level.

Remember that a reader’s response is a mixture of different writing styles and purposes, tied together by personal insight into the text. One can be written on any kind of text. That’s why there is such a rich diversity in what you’ve chosen to study this year.

Finally, there is the commencement address, which was not assigned with a guide. Instead, you have multiple examples and the skill to find more. A simple search will turn up hundreds of templates and guides, because the commencement address is a universal experience: https://lmgtfy.com/?q=commencement+address+template.

The difficulty of that address is deciding its purpose. The audience is given. Your purpose, however, is up to you. That’s why the statement of that purpose is so important: What do you mean to convey to that audience? What lesson or message are you imparting to these graduates?

Use the comment section below to ask for clarification on any of these requirements.

March 3, 2020


Ongoing List of Required Instructional Reading



You Must Read


You wouldn’t usually see two of these update posts in a row, but this one has just one message: You need to read everything posted, copied, or written on a whiteboard.

To help, one of those whiteboards looks like this today:

We’ll use that space for a few weeks, mostly as a visual focal point. Your immediate focus is what you should have read. You’ve had all seven project posts for a month. There are modified handouts and printed copies, too. If you haven’t read everything, start reading now.

Then focus on the updates from yesterday:

Those three posts must be read. They reiterate the same information with increasing detail, so you can work your way up to the main post over the next week or so. You should immediately read the March 2 and TL;DR posts, however.

The related essay excerpts have been posted in several places and photocopied. Make sure you’ve read them.

Finally, you’ve had a formative assignment on statements of purpose since February 13. If you haven’t read it and watched its video examples, you have until Thursday:

As that Classroom posts says, you’ll have photocopies to annotate. The more you’ve read before Thursday, the more productive your work will be.

Ask any questions in the comments below.

Final Assessments


In-Class Focus and Feedback


Before we talk about anything else, here is your reminder that in-class focus and your use of feedback will determine the majority of your grade for the second semester:

All second-semester projects have rolling deadlines. You can set specific deadlines and checkpoints, because everything can be individualized; you are most likely, however, to prefer to do your work at your own pace.

That means that your choices in class, from the goals you set each day to your ability to avoid distraction, will contribute directly to your profile. Until June, there is no such thing as “late work”; there is just the evidence of your choices.

You have four or five projects to consider. You can individualize the work. There isn’t much excuse for being off-task and unproductive when you have that much agency and autonomy.


Repeated: Deadlines and Grades


June 2 is the end of GAP Q4B and the last official day for Senior Talk presentations. June 3–5 will be used for late presentations, second attempts, and other last-minute adjustments. June 5 is the soft deadline for all work

June 8–12 is when we will solidify final grades, including scores for the final exam, and final averages. Senior grades will be finalized and posted on June 12.

Except for your final exam, you control the deadlines and feedback given to these projects. Feedback on your work is the same as it ever was:

The process of grading you is also the same as it ever was:

Grades are based on evidence of universal skills and traits. Feedback uses those same universal languages. Grades and feedback are most dependent on your in-class focus and use of feedback, and you will do best when you focus on growth, collaboration, and transparency.

Exception: final exam

Your reflection on the Senior Talk is your final exam. Unlike the evidentiary approach of the GAP scoring process, this is the qualitative assessment of a single artifact. It is graded through a writing rubric based on our universal writing process.

Here is a folder with a collection of these rubrics:

The two that will be used for the final exam are these:

You must follow all separate instructions and guidelines for this reflective essay.


Repeated: Artifact Checklist


These are the artifacts due during the second semester. Consider the etymology again: An artifact is anything made with skill. Each of these artifacts will either be a formative step or part of a summative project.

  1. Self-Prescribed Book Choice | Completed online through a Google Form.
  2. Self-Prescribed Book Project | Presentations, projects, discussions, etc. Submitted in class and/or online according to individual needs.
  3. Research-Driven Essay Focus | Completed online through a Google Form.
  4. Research-Driven Essay | Final draft and links to any online publishing. Due on Google Classroom.
  5. MLA-Formatted Research-Driven Essay | Properly formatted submission to Turnitin.com.
  6. Commencement Address | Final draft and links to any online publishing. Due on Google Classroom and Turnitin.
  7. Pareto Project Student Work | Presentations, projects, discussions, etc. Submitted in class and/or online according to individual needs.
  8. Pareto Project Final Self-Assessment | Completed online through a Google Form. Two parts.
  9. Senior Talk Statement of Purpose | Completed online through a Google Form that also sets the time for the actual presentation.
  10. Senior Talk Script | Final draft due through Google Classroom. Must also be submitted to Turnitin.com.
  11. Senior Talk Presentation | Presented to an audience in a space of the presenter’s choosing.
  12. Senior Talk Reflection & Final Exam | Final draft due through Google Classroom. Must also be submitted to Turnitin.com.

 

Final Obligations

Five months later, we return to the root of obligation — ligare, “to bind,” which can be positive or negative. Let’s talk about the former usage.


Repeated: What Our Makerspace Does


Core English courses that are not affiliated with the College Board nor a state or local college enjoy a bit of freedom from the traditional superstructure of high school. The foundation is the same — that’s why the district’s SCP looks just like our set of universal skills and traits — but what we build is different.

Through the end of Q2, this has meant dividing our year into skill-based units and units based on essential questions and authentic problems:

① The Age of the Essay
② What Is Literature For?
③ The Practice of Empathy
④ Organization: Getting Things Done
⑤ When the Truth Isn’t Sufficient

This structure derives from what a Humanities makerspace is. Read that explanatory post again. This time, pay attention to the following section:

The problems students face [in a Humanities makerspace] are the problems all of us face, and they are exactly the problems that the Humanities exist to solve:

What does it mean to be a human being?
What does it mean to coexist in a society?
What are my beliefs?
How do I want to live my life?

An English classroom is also the home of soft skills, including self-awareness and self-efficacy, which raises a few more questions for the makerspace:

What does it mean to be educated?
What is the purpose of school?
How does each of us learn best?
What are the most important skills and traits for our futures?

Like any makerspace, we experiment to find solutions to these problems and answer these questions. We collaborate, ask experts, do research. We try to think outside the box. We sometimes try to dismantle the box to build a better one.

The tools and components we pour out on the table are a set of universal skills and traits, our connections to other human beings, and the literature and nonfiction that best teaches us how to be human.

In your final semester, you might study whether video games can be art, whether obscenity has an objective definition, whether schools take care of mental health effectively, or any of a dozen other authentic issues. These might be part of a research paper, a book project, a speech, a presentation, or your own self-directed project.

You are making meaning now. It all comes down to you.


Repeated: Second Semester Projects


The major five projects are tied together through the concept of project-based learning and the underlying paradigm shifts of the Humanities makerspace. The instructional posts for all projects are listed here:

Each of these projects will be your best examples of what you are capable of in this learning environment. There may be formative assignments given to help you along, and individual assignments will be available according to need and interest.

On Google Classroom, the Stream, as always, will show you updates, newly posted assignments, announcements, and so on. Under Classwork, in order from the top, you’ll find the following resources and categories:

  • TPXA :: Brewster High School Library | Digital resources for every project.
  • Daily Calibration | Start-of-class worksheet, post, and check-in forms. You must set a specific daily goal here.
  • Second Semester Projects | Submission hub for all evidence related to the five major projects, plus an overview of the second semester.
  • Second Semester Formative Work | Checkpoint assignments, Google Forms, and other formative steps related to each project.
  • Individual Work | Appears as a category if you’ve been given an individual deadline, assignment, modification, etc. Reminder: Almost everything can be individualized.

Deadlines and Grades


June 2 is the end of GAP Q4B and the last official day for Senior Talk presentations. June 3–5 will be used for late presentations, second attempts, and other last-minute adjustments. June 5 is the soft deadline for all work

June 8–12 is when we will solidify final grades, including scores for the final exam, and final averages. Senior grades will be finalized and posted on June 12.

Except for your final exam, you control the deadlines and feedback you are given for each project. Feedback is the same as it ever was:

The process of grading you is also the same as it ever was:

Grades are based on evidence of universal skills and traits. Your feedback uses that same universal language. Grades and feedback are most dependent on your in-class focus and use of feedback, and you will do best when you focus on growth, collaboration, and transparency.

Exception: final exam

Your reflection on the Senior Talk is your final exam. Unlike the evidentiary approach of the GAP scoring process, this is the traditional assessment of a single artifact. It is graded through a writing rubric based on our universal writing process.

Here is a folder with a collection of these rubrics:

The two that will be used for the final exam are these:

You must follow all separate instructions and guidelines. As a final exam, this paper will constitute one-fifth of your final average.


Artifact Checklist


These are the artifacts due during the second semester. Consider the etymology again: An artifact is anything made with skill. Each of these artifacts will either be a formative step or part of a summative project.

  1. Self-Prescribed Book Choice | Completed online through a Google Form.
  2. Self-Prescribed Book Project | Presentations, projects, discussions, etc. Submitted in class and/or online according to individual needs.
  3. Research-Driven Essay Focus | Completed online through a Google Form.
  4. Research-Driven Essay | Final draft and links to any online publishing. Due on Google Classroom.
  5. MLA-Formatted Research-Driven Essay | Properly formatted submission to Turnitin.com.
  6. Commencement Address | Final draft and links to any online publishing. Due on Google Classroom and Turnitin.
  7. Pareto Project Student Work | Presentations, projects, discussions, etc. Submitted in class and/or online according to individual needs.
  8. Pareto Project Final Self-Assessment | Completed online through a Google Form. Two parts.
  9. Senior Talk Statement of Purpose | Completed online through a Google Form that also sets the time for the actual presentation.
  10. Senior Talk Script | Final draft due through Google Classroom. Must also be submitted to Turnitin.com.
  11. Senior Talk Presentation | Presented to an audience in a space of the presenter’s choosing.
  12. Senior Talk Reflection & Final Exam | Final draft due through Google Classroom. Must also be submitted to Turnitin.com.

 

Senior Talks

Download a copy of the complete guide here: https://tinyurl.com/sisyphus-senior-talk. Download an updated copy of the final guide to presentations here: https://tinyurl.com/sisyphus-final-guide. For a combined and collated copy of all materials, use this: https://tinyurl.com/senior-talks-full-serif.

More resource links are embedded below in this interstitial instructional post. Review all directions and requirements. Up-to-date information and feedback will be posted to Google Classroom.

Continue reading

December 6, 2019


Stay Organized


Circle back as often as necessary to the organizational resources from our mini-unit in November:

The most important resources are time in class and feedback from a teacher. Advocate for what you need. You’ll never be denied help.

For a while, some of the printed resources will be fanned out like this: Workshop Materials – Copies. You can zoom in on that image to see the wide range of choices available to you, from essay guides to copies of posts.

Below is another rundown of what to do. Remember that all course-wide feedback, updates, and instructions are dated and posted here: 2019-2020 Specifics.


GAP Q2A


Monday, December 9, is the end of the first panel of Quarter 2. Here is a screenshot, taken on Friday, December 6, of all the formal work due through Google Classroom during that panel:

You were also given digital and physical copies of a December Resource Pack that bridges Q1 and Q2. It’s posted to Google Classroom, the front page of this website, and the side menus. Here it is again:

DECEMBER RESOURCE PACK

Student Calendar [December]
Student Resources
Artifact Feedback Worksheet
GAP Worksheet [Q2A]

The GAP Worksheet [Q2A] lists out every assignment for Q2A as a self-assessment exercise. It contains a checklist. The only change is that the optional revisions of the last river essay were moved to Q2B.

As scores for Q2A are finalized, you’ll be given feedback based around the ideas in this post:

Feedback: In Shambles

You must read this carefully. You should also read the instructional post on sufficient and insufficient work.

The “shambles” post will be printed and distributed for in-class review on 12/9 and 12/10; the rest must be read on your own time.


Reader’s Response Essay


During the two weeks before winter break, you must complete a reader’s response, the specific requirements of which are found in two instructional posts:

  1. The Things They Carried
  2. Required Writing: When the Truth Isn’t Sufficient

The deadline is December 19 for the draft and a Turnitin.com submission. Here is a screenshot of the assignment on Google Classroom:

Note that there are options for students who did not complete the novel. All students can write this reader’s response, regardless of their progress on the novel.

As a component of the writing process, you must also answer five essential questions, which are outlined in the “Required Writing” post. Your responses will fuel discussion, which will shape the reader-response writing.

Copies of the reader-response guide are printed. Here is a direct link: tinyurl.com/maker-readres.


Pareto Projects


Your secondary focus, after the reader-response essay, will be to give feedback to select Pareto Projects. Be sure you have carefully read this post:

The Feedback Chain

You must give feedback in the way you want to receive it. The Golden Rule still applies.

Note that the students presenting or otherwise showcasing their projects this month have volunteered to do so. These works-in-progress will be featured on Fridays, but you will have access to them on other days.

These peers have put themselves out there, and you must respect that effort. You are not required to give feedback; if you do give feedback, however, it must be constructive and empathetic.

This worksheet is a good default mechanism for giving other students feedback on their Pareto Projects: Artifact Feedback Worksheet. Many copies are available in class.

As an example of how to approach this, consider this project:

If that file doesn’t load, here is a direct link to Google Drive: Student Short Fiction – 12/6.

Zoom in to see the extraordinary work done by this student. They created the feedback sheets you see for each piece, just like they prepared the folders and photocopies. All of it is available to anyone interested in reading and providing feedback.

This is where the language of the top-tier profiles comes into play. The eights, those who see a 95 in the gradebook, will embrace the chance to help out a peer with their writing:

An 8 reflects a systemic investment in the course and a desire to do more than just what is required. These students are also collegial, curious, and amenable in ways that galvanize their peers and demonstrably improve the learning environment.

If you want to improve the learning environment, give other students good feedback. Encourage their passion projects. Help them write the reader-response, sure, and keep them focused in class — that galvanizes, too. Pareto Projects are personal, though, and deserve special attention.

November 18, 2019

Notes and updates for Monday, November 18, 2019, which is the start of the second quarter. Read carefully, take notes, and ask questions.


Skill Building: Organization


We are going to take a few days to work on organization as an essential skill. The reading and writing components are here:

Organization: Getting Things Done

It’s worth noting the SWOT analysis assignment that is given context within that post. You may also benefit from reading this post, which is also another example of how feedback works best:

Exemplary Feedback

Don’t drag your feet about this organizational work until a formal assignment is posted to Google Classroom. Show that you can take steps forward before then. Let the posts guide you.


Soft Reboot: Q2


You need to make better use of the physical space, starting with the following directions.

The whiteboard table needs to have a more limited number of students using it at any given time, and those students need to be working on an assignment that requires a whiteboard.

The office chairs need to stay by the touchscreen TV for small-group instruction, which can be expanded to include the conference table lined up with the TV.

The rest of the furniture needs to be spread out — no more bunching up in groups of five or six just to be near each other. If it’s not a conscious decision to improve collaboration, rethink it.

If you don’t need your phone for reading or writing, it should be stored somewhere else. If you do need it for an assignment, you also need permission. Any other use is distracting you.

You can still choose to work with any peers you’d like to work with. If you’re not productive in those groups, that will be reflected in feedback and assessment.


Start of Class


The information from this handout/post is required:

This is posted to Google Classroom, right above the required daily calibration. It’s on the front page of this website as direct links:

It’s on the walls by the cell phone cubbies, too, and you will be using those more frequently.

You need to learn self-reliance and self-control. It starts with goal-setting. Do the daily calibration form every day until it’s a habit.

You also need to get to work immediately after any announcements or directions are given. You need time to transition into the right headspace, but you must be moving in that direction.


Feedback Chain


You should have a printed copy of this post on feedback:

The Feedback Chain

It is required reading. The post is obviously a better place to read this information, because you can enlarge images, click on links, etc; it’s been printed so that you can shut down your screens and read without distractions, if you need to.


Snap&Read Universal and Co:Writer Universal


This is part of the organizational mini-unit, but it needs to be isolated here. It will help with the amount of instructional reading you must do.

Review the plug-ins Snap&Read Universal and Co:Writer Universal. You can use them to eliminate distractions, define words, look up references, and so on. If you don’t already have these from last year, we can take a period to install and review them as a class.


The Things They Carried


Continue reading the book. Don’t stop reading it. Don’t ask what page number you have to reach — the answer is that you should keep reading until you finish.

There will be a post on what you’ll do with this novel, but not until we’ve completed a soft reboot of the course through an organizational mini-unit.

The next few weeks of Q2 will be spent studying The Things They carried or incorporating it into other lessons. Keep reading.


River Writing: On Empathy


Continue writing the essay. Here again is the prompt:

River Writing: On Empathy

Don’t wait for another deadline to be posted to Google Classroom. One will be there, but not until we finish these organizational lessons.

Just keep writing. Set up conferences, ask questions, and collaborate with each other. Show that you can be self-directed.


Pareto Projects: Q2


We had a chance to talk last week about sharing progress through structured discussions, small presentations, and other showcases. Starting in December, we’ll use the occasional Friday to do this.

Note two things:

  1. This low-stakes work will be good practice for the end-of-year senior talks.
  2. You will only have to share out your progress according to your comfort level.

Interstitial Instructional Posts


Lastly, another reminder to read actively and interstitially — that is, when you have a few minutes to dedicate to it — every post like this one.

If you aren’t clicking on links and actively taking in information from these posts, start clicking on links and actively taking in information. Every post will teach you more than what’s indicated in its title or subheading. Most posts will review important skills, traits, and knowledge, if you read actively and deeply.

Mostly, though, you can’t be lost if you read and click and think a little bit. These posts are the textbooks, packets, and lectures of the course. They also provide flexibility for every assignment. But you have to read them.

If you have questions, including questions about these updates, ask them in the comment section, where other students can benefit from the answers.

November 13, 2019

Quarter 1 ends on Friday, November 15. Let’s use the next three days to assess your progress.

The most powerful and consistent feedback is, as always, the GAP score you receive. It indicates a profile, and that profile is a cipher for universal skills and traits that were honed and tested through various assignment from the panel or quarter.

The next most powerful and consistent feedback is found in instructional posts like this recent one. These posts improve your ability to self-assess through exemplars, general discussion, and the practice of deep reading.

The third level of feedback is what happens in class. The caveat is that the power of that face-to-face feedback is almost entirely dependent on how well you use the kinds mentioned above. If you have some clarity on grade abatement and read deeply on this website, you have the foundations for bell-to-bell work in the makerspace.


11/13/19 – 11/15/19


Over the next few days, you will self-assess through another GAP report, submit evidence of your current writing process, and share your Q1 Pareto Project progress. Except for the GAP report, these submissions will be part of the evidentiary process for Q2A, which ends on December 9. The focus will be on growth and improvement.

You should also focus on reading as far as possible in the current novel, The Things They Carried. There is no page number you need to reach, because the goal is now to finish. Demonstrate through your actions that you are hitting your potential, not an arbitrary page number. This weekend, after we’ve wrapped up Q1, you will receive a instructional post with more context.

Finally, we need to collaborate to improve your use of class time. I think this starts with a soft ban on phones. Read this updated guide to the start of class, and note the emphasis on how you set up your physical workspace: What to Do at the Start of Class.

Some of you will need direct, written feedback about your use of class time. This may be written to groups, not just individuals. Others may need to be separated physically from their self-selected groups in order to build better habits.

Remember that many people struggle to be disciplined at work. The Dunning-Kruger effect is one reason for that. Whatever the reason, you need enough self-awareness and self-control to stay focused when required to, especially when the requirement is only 30-40 minutes at a time.

These are the habits and skills everyone needs. If you read this instructional post carefully, you learned that colleges and careers desire self-control and self-efficacy as much any job-specific skill set of academic knowledge.

I believe that part of what’s happening is, first, that jobs are increasingly automated and outsourced, which means that the more important skills are human ones, like empathy and creativity. The analog in academics is the extent to which knowledge is externalized and crowdsourced. The more important skills are, again, the ones that can’t be programmed, like collegiality and creativity.

And at the base of that collaborative and creative skillset is the capacity to focus and regulate yourself. If you’re competing with machine learning and automated productivity, you can’t get distracted every five minutes by gossip or your phone. You have to be disciplined and serious. The difference between you and everyone else will be your capacity to conquer what is called akrasia.

Right now, far too many of you are undisciplined and unserious. You can call it senioritis, blame it on the system, etc, but it comes down to habits of mind:

Ongoing Discussion: Grain through the Body of a Bird

October 27, 2019

Example of a Penrose staircase.


Back to Basics: Why Basic Assignments Matter Most


Perhaps the most notable similarity between a GAP score of 8 and a GAP score of 4 is the emphasis on basic assignments. If you complete these basic tasks, a final grade of 90 is likely; if you don’t, a final grade of 70 might be the highest you can go.

Tier Four: “Required Assignments”

Tier Two: “Basic Requirements”

In terms of skills, let’s use the metaphor of steps:

You’re asked to climb. If you skip the first step, you can probably stretch and get to the second. Some of you can take two steps at a time to get where we’re going.

But if you stop climbing, or if you refuse to take the majority of those first steps, you don’t move up.

You also can’t start at the top of the stairs, or even halfway up them; you have to take those first steps first.


GAP Triage


When you load the relevant spreadsheet file, you’ll find color-coded feedback arranged by period and student number.

Before you do that: Do not read this mathematically. Do not compare different rows. These data are part of a larger narrative, and you will absolutely get that narrative wrong if you go looking at other people’s feedback.

There is no efficient way to flip teacher notes to you than what I’ve done here. This alone takes the better part of a weekend. Do not mistake this for anything but part of the larger narrative.

Note, too, that this includes only basic assignments. You had many more assignments over the last month:

  • “Why Read?” Response
  • Response to WIP GAP: 10/11
  • Goodreads Response
  • River Essay #1
  • Ongoing Pareto Projects

Discrepancies in final GAP scores are a result of these assignments, which were given feedback separately and constitute the more meaningful and personalized parts of the course.

Triage, as we’re using the metaphor here, is about showcasing for some of you where the damage is. It’s about treating those wounds.

The following post explains how to read these spreadsheets. This is required reading if you’d like to make sense of those zeros, ones, and twos:

GAP Score Triage: Overview

Understand that this information is being shared to help you understand the need to complete basic assignments. That’s the goal: to run triage for as many students as possible as efficiently as possible.

These data should also help you see the repercussions of good and bad choices. It will put it, as that post argues, into Skinner-box triggers anyone can understand. This is not the usual way to share feedback on your progress.

It is also always relevant that posting grades online is destructive to your learning:

It’s not enough to disseminate grades more efficiently — for example, by posting them online. There is a growing technology, as the late Gerald Bracey once remarked, “that permits us to do in nanoseconds things that we shouldn’t be doing at all” (quoted in Mathews, 2006). In fact, posting grades online is a significant step backward because it enhances the salience of those grades and therefore their destructive effects on learning.

Posting these zeros and ones in Infinite Campus would be detrimental to you. It would also communicate absolutely no new information at that time. It would warp and disrupt the learning process.

Again, this is explained in the post on GAP triage. You must read those directions before reacting limbically to these numbers. You should absolutely not compare your row to anyone else’s. You would be operating without the information you need, and you’d be learning the wrong lesson from these data.

In brief: If you are missing work, that is obvious; if the work is insufficient or incomplete, that, too, is obvious:

Insufficient vs. Sufficient Work

All assignments can be easily checked through Google Classroom. You should also have notes on face-to-face feedback, plenty of typed feedback through Google Docs and Classroom, etc.

So these are the basics. These are the first steps. The spreadsheet, again, doesn’t include any of the larger responses, like your river essay, because those bigger assignments can only be assessed effectively after you’ve done these basic assignments.

That’s how you need to read this triage spreadsheet. It shows the basic, simple, easy stuff that you have weeks, sometimes, to finish. Doing these simple tasks allows us to apply a makerspace mentality to your more elevated writing, reading, and so on; not doing them prevents you making any real progress until you do complete them.

Note that this will be a live link on 10/28:

  • Spreadsheets for All Classes: GAP Q1B Triage [PDF]

A copy of that PDF will also be sent to you through Google Classroom. Below is a brief description of each assignment in the order they are listed in this triage spreadsheet.

Final GAP Score | What’s now posted in Infinite Campus. Unpack it with the profiles, skills and traits, and GAP guide. Ask for clarification.

WIP GAP Score [9/27] | See the post from October 2, 2019 and the explanation of WIP GAP scores.

Self-Reported GAP Score | If you don’t communicate where you think you are, no one can redirect you, validate you, conference with you, etc. If this number is off by more than one profile from your actual Q1B score, schedule a conference. See this year’s organizing post.

Self-Analysis ¶ | The self-reported GAP score is useless without this. If you don’t communicate why you selected a particular score, you might as well be guessing. Note, too, that if you don’t write enough to provide insight, this paragraph is a nonstarter.

Daily Calibration Check | This is required. I looked at a day when most students were present and had many ongoing assignments to work on.

In-Class Rubicon [10/7+10/8] | Two days considered together. See the post on October 8 for more. If you aren’t using class time well, you can’t expect to do well.

In-Class Rubicon [WIP: 9/27] | You especially can’t expect to do well after being warned, again and again, that you have to be on-task in class.

Guided Analysis: Graham | These are the traditional analysis questions that allow you to write freely on different subjects with that universal writing process guide. There probably isn’t a more important assignment from Q1.

Edpuzzle: Question 5 | This was a five-minute video accompanied by five questions. These are the basic questions that let us study literature without quizzes, traditional tests, etc. After the analysis of Graham, there probably isn’t a more important assignment from Q1, and the most important question is this one, from the end of the video.

Summer Reading Form | You could do this in two minutes, if you didn’t read. If you did read, this became the basis of the next week’s more in-depth writing response. Either way, it’s a simple form.


Note on Late Work


In many cases, assignment deadlines are waived, at least in terms of meeting those “basic requirements.” If you get it done, it still has value, so it counts.

The lateness counts, too, however. if it takes you weeks to finish something, you still have all the other steps to take. You’re now behind. You have to work faster to catch up.

There’s also a point after which the feedback you could have gotten is no longer possible. That’s why you might have completed something after the deadline, probably after the end of the Q1B panel, and not see it reflected here. We can “fix” that, by which I mean that we can adjust your profile, if possible, by meeting to go over the evidence.

The more important consideration is why you’re getting any work in so late that it isn’t reflected here. Of course we should get you the credit you deserve; the greater concern, however, is that you’re not meeting deadlines, even when those deadlines are flexible.

To use the metaphor of steps again: You can’t sprint up the steps at the last second without the risk of tripping, stumbling backward, and landing back at the start.

Note, too, that your teachers are always here to help you get to the top of those metaphorical stairs. We’re with you, as you walk, to the extent you need us. There even are escalators for some of you to use.

Ask questions below.

Learning Overview: About the Makerspace

This is sometimes shared with students and other stakeholders as a syllabus, because using that term lets us look at how we all approach learning. One interesting thing about the word syllabus is that it comes from a misreading of Latin. That doesn’t change its meaning now, but it does let us think more critically about what a syllabus actually does, not just what we expect it to do.

This syllabus is a guide, but not to the arbitrary dates when we start or stop a unit. It is a guide to our learning, which is a makerspace-inspired study of writing and reading in the Humanities.

Each curriculum prepares students to meet individual goals while maintaining fidelity to the frameworks and expectations used by all teachers. Students are given unique versions of flipped instruction, project-based learning, and standards-based assessment. This frees them up to do authentic work in a collaborative environment.

We focus on reigniting the writing and reading lives of students before they leave public school. There is a universal writing process and a reflective, student-driven reading process to empower even the most reluctant students.

This “syllabus” is also an example itself of how instruction ought to work — flipped so that you can access it at your own pace, with plenty of opportunities to ask questions and receive feedback.

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