The Age of the Essay, Updated

Finding the River

Camille Corot's "Interrupted Reading" (1870)

Camille Corot’s “Interrupted Reading” (1870)

Here is Paul Graham’s “The Age of the Essay” as posted to his website: http://www.paulgraham.com/essay.html.

Read this carefully. You aren’t required to annotate the text, except that annotation helps you to understand it. Annotating is one way to build understanding. Another is to collaborate on an interrupted reading of the text.

Interrupted reading is what it sounds like: You read a bit, discuss or write about what you’ve read, and then read more. That’s closer to what real-world reading looks like, and it invites others into the discussion. For that purpose, you’ll be given a copy with numbered paragraphs: Paul Graham’s “The Age of the Essay” (Reformatted).

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Find the River: Project Options

JMW Turner, The Thames above Waterloo Bridge, c.1830-5. 

We are a few days into Week Three of this Final Project. Many of you have your topic from Week Two and are well on your way to the statement of purpose that is due Monday, May 18. This post is for any student still struggling with the first few steps of this project.

Here are this week’s resources:

The models in the second link offer many options. If you are feeling overwhelmed, however, or simply don’t know how to move forward, read on. This post will give you three more options.


Finding the River


Each of these options fulfills the requirements of the final project. The benefit now is that you could develop a statement of purpose by Monday, even if you start today1.

These options all rest on the universal writing process available for download here:

You’ll have to do some research and further reading, draft your response, generate feedback, and so on, but your project will start with the “river” writing approach we’ve used all year.

The idea here is to give you another level of help: You would choose one of the following three options, write a statement of purpose by Monday, and then be back on track for the rest of the calendar.

Ask questions in the comment section below.

Final Option #1: Three-Minute Graduation Speech

Use the universal writing guide to develop a three-minute graduation speech. You can submit this to administration for a chance to give the speech during graduation this year. Ms. Horler sent a note to you on May 6 with more information:

It’s that time of year already. We are looking for one amazing, unique and heartfelt speech for graduation. We will be hearing speeches on June 1st from 10-12. The speech needs to be under 3 minutes. If you are interested, work on a speech and email your intent. I will send you a time slot to give your speech to our panel.
Stay Well!
Ms.Horler

This speech requires a statement of purpose, some research, a draft, etc, just like any other project. Don’t let the three-minute requirement deceive you — this has a high degree of difficulty!

Resources:

  1. Writing Process: Universal Guide | tinyurl.com/sisyphus-writes
  2. Commencement Address | sisypheanhigh.com/malachite/?p=3791
Final Option #2: Open Letter or Longer Speech

Use the universal writing guide to develop an open letter or longer speech. This could be an address to the graduating class, like the three-minute speech in Option #1, but it would not be limited in scope.

You could also select a different audience for an open letter. To do this, you would use that universal writing guide. There is definite overlap here with Option #3; the difference is the concept of an open letter or speech in this one.

Note also that the goal of this letter or speech is to share it. That is not required, but it is a goal. Consider the instructional post on the end of the writing process: A specific audience beyond your teacher(s) makes the work more authentic.

Resources:

  1. Writing Process: Universal Guide | tinyurl.com/sisyphus-writes
  2. The End of the Writing Process | sisypheanhigh.com/malachite/?p=2114
Final Option #3: River Essay — Quarantine Edition

Use the universal writing guide to develop an essay. For this option, you are using the definition of essay we identified by studying Paul Graham in the fall.

Start with your observations, feelings, etc, during this quarantine. Read what others have written in the last two months. Cast a wide net, and pay attention, as Graham says, to what you’re not supposed to.

You can use Jerry Jesness’ “Floating Standard” essay as a model, if that helps your own design. Note that specific kind of research-driven essay, as  the original project explains, is about identifying and trying to solve a problem; for this final option, you do not need to do that.

Resources:


  1. This will be posted on May 13, five days before the deadline. Remember, though, that these deadlines are flexible: You can take the time you need to do this the way you’d like. 

The Age of the Essay

If you are looking for the lightly updated version for 2022, click here.

Camille Corot’s “Interrupted Reading” (1870)


Our Approach to Writing


Our writing philosophy in this course is best expressed by Neil Postman:

Writing makes it possible and convenient to subject thought to a continuous and concentrated scrutiny. Writing freezes speech and in so doing gives birth to the grammarian, the logician, the rhetorician, the historian, the scientist — all those who must hold language before them so that they can see what it means, where it errs, and where it is leading.

Over time, that philosophy has led to a universal writing process. Here are the links you need to utilize that process:

The universal writing guide, college essay guide, and Paul Graham’s “The Age of the Essay” are also available in a printed packet:

The universal guide is essential to any writing-based work in our makerspace. Paul Graham’s “The Age of the Essay” is also the textual focus of our writing unit. More on that below.

Overall, except when test prep is necessary, you should read what you write and write what you read. You must understand how an author writes in order to emulate that author, of course, so we are focused on using what we read, not doing what David Foster Wallace described as “the literary equivalent of tearing the petals off and grinding them up and running the goo through a spectrometer to explain why a rose smells so pretty.”

This essay, while focused in part on one particular quarter/class, explains more of what analysis means to us:

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The Age of the Essay


Here is Paul Graham’s “The Age of the Essay” on his website:

Read this carefully. You aren’t required to annotate the text, but you must understand it. Annotating is one way to do that. Another is to read the essay individually and silently. The collaborative chaos you create on most days is vital, and I think we will always be more inclined to spend our time that way than any other. It’s important, however, that you occasionally let silence into your life, especially while you read. Sometimes you need to sit with your own thoughts, free of distraction, in order to find meaning.

Once you’ve read Graham’s essay, complete the following:

Q&A: “The Age of the Essay”

I might also encourage you to practice interrupted reading with this text. The copy below numbers the paragraphs:

Interrupted reading is what it sounds like: You read a bit, discuss or write about what you’ve read, and then read more. That’s closer to what real-world reading looks like, and it invites others You don’t want to destroy the act of reading, though, which is why you should read the instructional essay on analysis and over-analysis. You need a balance.

To encourage you to get started, here is an excerpt from the beginning of Graham’s essay on essays:

The most obvious difference between real essays and the things one has to write in school is that real essays are not exclusively about English literature. Certainly schools should teach students how to write. But due to a series of historical accidents the teaching of writing has gotten mixed together with the study of literature. And so all over the country students are writing not about how a baseball team with a small budget might compete with the Yankees, or the role of color in fashion, or what constitutes a good dessert, but about symbolism in Dickens.

With the result that writing is made to seem boring and pointless. Who cares about symbolism in Dickens? Dickens himself would be more interested in an essay about color or baseball.

How did things get this way? To answer that we have to go back almost a thousand years…

The complete essay gives you the rest of the history, and then it gives us the philosophy and practicality we’ll need to spend the rest of the school year developing your ability and desire to write.

You should also read Graham’s “A Version 1.0,” which is an interesting look at how he edited and revised “The Age of the Essay” into its published state. Here is a direct link: