Regents Prep: Rubicon+


Current Assignments


We’ve spent the last month working carefully in class on the June ’17 ELA Regents Exam. As we head into the winter break, you should revisit this post, and then you should focus on these assignments:

  1. Typed Revision of Part 2 of June ’17 Exam | Instructions are on Google Classroom.
  2. Text-Based Analysis (Part 3 of June ’17 Exam) | Instructions are on Google Classroom.

You must complete both of these assignments before January 2, unless you and I work out an alternative deadline. See below for penalty information.


Rubicon: Pass/Fail


The point of no return is sometimes called “crossing the Rubicon.” This course is now, as you know, pass/fail. Your Rubicon is the moment when you cross into failure for the quarter. Here is a direct link to the assessment profiles we are using:

This is normally an obvious determination that uses Occam’s logic or the duck test. Starting now, however, every time you break the rules of the classroom, including the requirement to focus on coursework at all times, those failures will be recorded and shared with parents, counselors, administrations, etc., in order to help you assume responsibility as you prepare for the exam.

You will be tracked on my end through a form that looks like this:

I select the date, choose a name from a dropdown menu, and note the unacceptable behavior. Examples include:

  1. doing homework for another class
  2. playing games
  3. sending text messages
  4. watching videos
  5. sleeping
  6. gossiping
  7. checking social media accounts
  8. wandering the hallways

There will be contemporaneous notes for your progress, and those notes can be given to any stakeholder, from parents to counselors, in order to help you. Separate notes are kept for missing assignments, incomplete work, and so on.

If you have questions, ask them in class. You may also comment below and/or send an email.

The Edge of the City

Below are instructional writings for you all to read. Photocopies will be distributed in class. The images are from the manga Blame!, which is set in the literalized feeling of public education.


The Mirror and the Mountain


Short URL: https://goo.gl/iHxeYo

TL;DR — Stop shifting the blame in this course. Take responsibility for the choices you’ve made, or accept that your frustration and lack of learning is the choice you’ve made.


Crossing the Rubicon


Short URL: https://goo.gl/Eoodje

TL;DR — Every time you break the rules of the classroom, including the requirement to focus on course work at all times, those failures will be recorded and shared with parents, counselors, administrations, etc., from now until the end of the school year.


Remaining Calendars


RE11 Short URL: https://goo.gl/EtFTCR

 

AP11 Short URL: https://goo.gl/KpwJoF

This course calendar frames each day for the rest of the year. Don’t forget the other one.


Quick Guide to Stakeholder Involvement


Short URL: https://goo.gl/Ax3ufq

This expands the original document to include students, who actually are stakeholders in their education.

If you have questions or comments about the documents in this post, post those below.

GAP Framework: Within Reason


Within Reason


The scoring panel for the first part of Q2 ends tomorrow, December 1. You’ve been given specific criteria for a GAP score of 7 or higher, which we’ll review in a moment. Start with the profiles in full:

Click to embiggen.

The fourth tier is all about feedback, which you know is one of the two most important elements of success. This time, you were instructed to have evidence of your interstitial work, specifically in two categories:

  1. Notes on instructional posts
  2. Evidence of online contributions

These requirements are clarified below.

① Notes on instructional posts

The first instructional post for this scoring panel is “The Age of the Essay,” which was published on November 5. The most recent is “Well, Why Read?” which was published on November 29. Those posts, plus the many given in between, are responsive and multifaceted learning opportunities. You should have taken notes on them as you would on any academic reading assignment.

You had a checkpoint assignment on Google Classroom on November 27 that asked you to submit copies of these notes. Three more posts were created for you after that:

Within reason, you should have notes on these, too. The key phrase there, though? Within reason. You do not need hours of notes on every instructional post. The most recent ones make this explicit. You need to engage with each post, learn what you can from it, and determine how it helps you meet your learning goals.

There are dozens of possible approaches to this. What matters is that you have a habit of mind — that you are aware of every post, that you read every post, that you learn from every post. And that you ask questions.

② Evidence of online contributions

I won’t recap the many posts explaining why you should practice online discussion. It’s a requirement. You have to try it, much like you’d have to try to talk in an in-class discussion, if that was required.

In this course, the easiest way to ask questions and seek feedback, from me and from your peers, is to leave comments online:

Interstitial Discussion

This practices your communication and writing skills, your collegiality and amenability, your organization, and much more. It makes you think in writing, and it freezes your discussion for later reference. Within reason, you should have at least one contribution to these posts.

Again, the key phrase: within reason. You absolutely should invest in this site, because it’s the surest way to get feedback from peers and me in the context of instruction, but there are other ways to contribute interstitially. Here are a few:

  • Collaborating and leaving comments on peer work in Google Docs
  • Holding discussions through Google Communities
  • Having focused group chats (e.g., through text messages) about course work

If you continue your collaborative learning in a writing-driven way outside of our 40+ minutes together, that’s interstitial learning.

Note: I think it’s fair to have a discussion about whether or not taking notes on those instructional posts counts as interstitial evidence. It probably does. That teaching is designed, like this post that you’re reading now, to be consumed interstitially; notes on this kind of teaching are, therefore, interstitial. The issue is the lack of audience and potential collaboration. But any student reading this, now, who has chosen to work individually and interstitially probably has enough evidence there to elide the discussion/collaboration requirement.

On RE/AP Differences

One more thing: This is cross-posted to both junior courses, Regents and AP, in order to illustrate the universality of what we do. I also want to describe, in this public place, one of the key differences between a college-level course and a non-college-level course.

The language of the profiles for grade abatement is the same, and the basic course of study for a junior is the same (e.g., you all take the same Regents Exam in June). But the expectations differ. There are measurable increases in reading and writing assignments for AP students (plus the Lovecraftian AP exam in May), but the real difference is what’s expected.

The superlative language of a GAP 9, for instance, indicates different expectations. What qualifies as “strongest” or “best” in each course is different. Even a word like “precocious” takes on special meaning: In a college-level curriculum, the definition’s indication of “early development” operates in a different context.

How does this play out in GAP scoring? Within reason, a student in AP, in addition to completing the more numerous formal assignments, would take more notes on more instructional posts. She would contribute more often, and in more ways, to online discussions. You are still looking at a key phrase, though: within reason. Do not put crushing pressure on yourself in an AP class, and do not believe you can’t do more than what’s required in a Regents class.


GAP Scoring: Q2A


Find the GAP assignment on Google Classroom. Attach copies of any evidence that is required to justify your assumed profile. Include copies of evidence you’ve already submitted. Add links to shared folders as a comment there, on Google Classroom, if necessary. Then complete the Google Form included with the assignment.

When you complete the GAP report, which is in the usual format, be honest about your success over the last 3-4 weeks. Remember that growth requires honesty, and that each panel resets your evidence. From December 4 to December 22, you build another profile. You have another shot at the best kind of learning and the highest kind of reward.

In addition to the GAP report, you are strongly encouraged to complete a self-assessment spider graph, basing your plotted points on your work in each skill and trait over the last 3-4 weeks. You’ll need these handouts, in this order:

  1. Grade Abatement Skills & Traits
  2. Scoring Guidelines (Self-Assessment)
  3. Spider Graph: GAP Skills & Traits

You’ve seen most of them before, but not in this order or with this particular formatting and purpose. Look over the skills and traits, as always, to remind yourself what they entail; look over the quick scoring guidelines for a 0-9 self-assessment; and then fill in a hard copy of that spider graph with what you think your wheel of evidence looks like.

In case the Google Drawing of the spider graph doesn’t work, here’s a JPG version that you can print. You’ll have photocopies of all this on Friday, December 1.

Ask questions below.

Möbius Strips and Other Jazz


Möbius Strips


I want you to understand how important feedback is, and how important it is that it loops — me to you, you to me. In fact, a better metaphor might be a Möbius strip:

That’s cool by itself, but it also lets me link to this article, which is worth your time.

Our work has a kind of non-orientability. It lacks a “surface normal” element. In other words, there is a twist to it1.

There is a quotation at the top of our course website that helps my perspective:

  1. The content of a lesson is the least important thing about learning.
  2. The most important thing one learns is always something about how one learns.

I return to this frequently in planning your lessons, hoping to rebalance the process and product portions of our work. When we focus on process, we’re really focusing on feedback — how you communicate with me, and how I communicate with you.

Some of the more insightful comments left on recent instructional posts address this. (Here is a thread I entered that touches on goals and goal-setting.) I also received a half-dozen emails about it, many of them wondering how to navigate work without terminal deadlines. The short answer is to collaborate on student-generated deadlines, or to use the GAP protocol to set periodic endpoints, but this is all a distinct and dislocating shift for students.

It’s a shift for me, too. I have had to learn to think in writing, to prioritize individual feedback, and to be flexible in a way I never anticipated. Some deadlines and markers can’t be (or shouldn’t be) changed, like the ones baked into the GAP process; almost everything else, however, should have an element of mutability built-in. It’s like jazz, in a way: You have to be able to improvise, but there are boundaries. There are keys and tempos and other musicians sharing the space.

Certainly jazz is more complicated than that. So is process-focused learning. Metaphors and analogies help us figure out what to do with the time we’ve been given — and how to cultivate perspectives we didn’t have before. That’s why it’s important to write to you like this, in a way that opens up ramiform learning. Having mentioned jazz, I would invite you to lose an hour reading this essay on Thelonious Monk, which includes lines like this: “We love Dizzy, but Monk’s multi-dimensional mystery tugs more insistently at our consciousness than Dizzy’s sophisticated, sun-drenched delight. The ineffable allure of shadows.”

Back to the English part of the Humanities: If you look, you’ll see that the course calendar has you writing an essay right now. That essay was meant to teach you the skill of synthesis alongside a universal writing process, which would be based on Paul Graham’s advice in “The Age of the Essay.” You had several weeks’ worth of lessons building toward that.

You weren’t ready, though, when we returned from the Thanksgiving holiday. A pair of instructional posts (In the Spaces in Between, Antediluvian Discussion), posted a week apart, explore that reality, but it matters most that it is reality: You weren’t ready.

It seems like capitulation — surrender — to say it doesn’t matter that you weren’t prepared. So let’s not say that. It matters. GAP scoring holds you accountable for your choices, doesn’t it? What would we gain by pushing into an essay many of you aren’t prepared to write?

The answer is to shift the writing focus to next week, when you’ll begin 1984 and a packet of texts of all kinds on the subjects of memory, truth, and lies. This week is better spent on process.

This is a chance to validate your feedback to me, too. In RE11, your feedback helped your teachers identify the need for guided annotation and metacognition, so we’ll spend the end of our week doing that. In AP11, your feedback identified the need for guided help with these ETA questions. We’ll work radially and by proxy to glean what we can from those essays.


How to Read This Post


This kind of post is instructional. I’d like to unpack it for you, this time, to show you exactly what it teaches you. The central feedback — some version of, “Let’s be flexible about our work, and let’s talk about it more” — is surrounded by opportunities to learn about all this:

That list isn’t random. There are metaphors and deeper insights into our work. It’s also part and parcel of the course to want to learn more about things you didn’t know before — to become a polymath-in-training. These are interesting subjects. Reading about them is going to hone your close reading, critical thinking, etc., and maybe open you up to a new passion.


  1. But not one that breaks the rules of geometry. We haven’t fallen into the non-Euclidean nightmare of Lovecraft, for instance, although I might have to revise that statement before 2017 ends. 

Antediluvian Discussion

The word of the day is antediluvian.


Interstitial Discussion: Another Update


Let’s talk, once again, about how we talk to and work with each other. First, comments.

Comments are grouped, archived, and emailed to me by this website. They appear by post and comment thread. Below is a screenshot of the inbox dedicated to this process. It was taken Monday, November 27, around 6AM. I cleared the previous batch before going to sleep at 9PM on November 261.

Comments are also recorded on the website. The dedicated page for this, which was created on October 1, sorts them by time. Below is a screenshot of some of the comments left on November 26 (or in the midnight hours of November 27). If the inbox I maintain helps sort GAP evidence, this website page helps you sort opportunities to collaborate and to discuss.

The most recent post on how and why this interstitial approach works is here: In the Spaces in Between. It was published on November 20. Previously, you had posts that directly instructed you on using these resources, including The Ironic Use of TL;DR and The Aft Agley Gang, which were both published on October 30; Habits and Habitats, from October 20; Scripta Manent, from September 28; a post answering the question, “What Do I Do Next?” on September 22; and these two posts that opened the year. There are many more.

You’ve been told to use these interstitial resources. You’ve been shown why it matters. The work was never optional2. We absolutely need to figure out why it’s not being done.


Riders in the Storm


Comments are just one part of the interstitial classroom. They extend in-class discussion and allow you to think in writing, which gives you another angle on the instruction, feedback, and formal assignments that comprise the rest of the interstitial work we do.

The calendar offers an example of why this matters. Between the Thanksgiving holiday, last Wednesday’s assembly, several lockout and fire drills, teacher meetings, and the occasional illness, we haven’t had much time together in class. That inconsistency will continue in December with snow, which will give us the weird and muted joy of cancellations, delays, and early dismissals. Individually, you will miss time for sickness.

Without this website and a shared focus on interstitial instruction and learning, that fractured a schedule makes learning unsustainable. You lose the momentum necessary for productive reading and writing. Your academic muscles atrophy. You forget what you were up to, back when you had class, and often shrug your way past that feeling.

Or you try to use the survival skills you’ve learned elsewhere to make up that lost ground. You rush through work at the last second. You skip steps, copy answers, make excuses. That’s why there has been a flood of activity today. We are all creatures of habit, and here, again, that creature is a rat trapped in a Skinner box.

What happens is this3: You load Google Classroom, see an assignment, and spam the switch that looks like it will give a reward. If the assignment asks you to copy your notes and submit them, you might have to create those notes. If it asks you to copy ongoing work and submit it, you might have to churn out whatever you can during the class period. Reminded that you must contribute online, you might add several comments to different posts without reading much of what your peers have written.

There is limited efficacy in that. The sudden influx of comments really is too great for any kind of close, careful reading; instead of the ebb and flow of a digital conversation, there is a deluge. Your peers can’t monitor a thread when there are dozens of them appearing at once. I can’t provide ongoing feedback, because your contributions aren’t ongoing.

Similarly, when you try to take a week’s worth of notes in a single period, that deluge drowns any real learning. The work manages to be perfunctory and overwhelming at the same time4. You are rushing to fulfill a checklist, and that’s not how this kind of learning happens.

This sort of perfunctory and sometimes panicky approach also prevents you from recognizing comments that open up discussion, like this one:

That was one of the few comments left before the flood today. It is also a post driven by in-class feedback from me; the question is an attempt to galvanize others to apply Graham’s logic to an unrelated (but interesting) discussion. It would have helped you practice how to write succinctly and how to sign up for follow-up comments. Instead, it sat there for a week, unnoticed and unremarked.


The Chain


Of course, students who rush through assignments are still doing the assignments. That’s something. There are folks reading this who need to admit to greater need, and there are folks not reading this at all — or not reading it until it has been pushed on you by a teacher, either digitally or through printed copies5.

To take notes on this instructional post, all of you should answer one or both of the following questions about what most motivates you.

Do you want a good grade?

Start looking at your desire for a good grade more closely, then. You aren’t entitled to anything, and in here, your performance is all that matters. What you do is all that matters. And that includes when you do it.

If you want to do well, you mean that you’d like a 90 or higher. That requires you to keep up with instructional posts just as much as formal assignments and central texts. That fourth tier of profiles requires you to be metacognitive and reflective, to do those things consistently and insightfully, and to contribute meaningfully to the class as a result of your introspective work. You have to do that over time.

You might be able to justify a GAP score of 6 or 7 without a regular habit of reading, taking notes, and responding to materials. You might be able to meet the criteria by rushing at the last second, since that last-second work still teaches you more than you’d learn by doing nothing (and there are students doing nothing, as always). It’s unlikely, however, that your last-second work is brilliant enough to make up for your lack of assiduousness, organization, self-awareness, amenability, and self-efficacy.

If you want a good grade, you have to work interstitially.

Do you want to future-proof your skills?

In this question, “future-proof” means to give yourself the skills and knowledge to get into college and/or a career, to make the most of your relationships, and to thrive in whatever future you find. I can’t imagine anyone saying they don’t want that sort of strength, but it might be that you don’t see how reading this long post or leaving a comment gets you there.

Which is when I remind you that we’ve gone over the skills and traits of this course, including their connection to the skills and traits employers and colleges want. We’ve done it so often that it’s almost redundant to link to individual posts, as every post covers this. Here’s the one on empathy, for example. You’ve seen me emphasize self-control repeatedly (and through strangely violent metaphors). If you take the time to read Paul Graham’s essay, you’ll see how important writing is to any career, to say nothing of its importance to understanding yourself and your life. We started the year with the importance of reading, especially as it relates to empathy.

The only way to build these skills and traits is to chain them together, one link at a time, with an eye toward overall progress. You can’t fake your way into a good writing process. You can’t take shortcuts to empathy. You can’t sustain an insincere focus on collegiality for very long, and you won’t be productive while you try.

These posts get at the need for regular practice. They link to readings that emphasize other skills and traits. When you contribute interstitially to discussions, you get to practice organization, collegiality, and amenability. You can use the ramiform resources here to practice autodidactic and individualized instruction. You are always encouraged to lean into the kind of feedback that makes the most sense.

Desultory or perfunctory work barely creates the appearance of progress. It will feel like busywork, because you aren’t building anything; you’re rushing to get credit for what you haven’t been doing all along.

If you want to future-proof your skills, then, you have to work interstitially.


  1. This is not really the place to discuss the work you do late at night, but it’s at least worth a footnote. You know, because it is your lived experience, that work done late at night is work done less effectively. Even if you are a nocturnal kind of person, you don’t get to be that kind of person while you attend school. You get to wake up and attend classes at 7:45 in the morning. We need to figure out how to budget your time and work with foresight for a number of reasons; that your work suffers late at night is one of them. 

  2. In the sense that the option not to do it carries penalties. You can always choose to ignore instruction, avoid feedback, neglect assignments, etc., if you’re willing to accept the repercussions. 

  3. It should always be repeated that this is not true for everyone. It’s rarely true for the kind of student who reads footnotes. It’s true for enough students, however, that those of you reading this footnote should ask yourself a question: Which peers can you direct to this feedback, because you know they need it? You are stronger together, as the logic goes, and ought to think of how to help each other. 

  4. That word, perfunctory, is a helpful word to internalize. It means to go through the motions — to do something without much effort and reflection. Another helpful word is desultory, which indicates a lack of planning or logical connection. The etymology of desultory provides an interesting image, too, that might help you realize how important consistent habits of mind are. You can’t keep jumping from horse to horse. You’ll break something. 

  5. But we will avoid printed copies as much as possible. It’s a surrender to your lack of planning, when it happens by default. If you want a printed copy, you should print one; that’s why we have a printer in our classroom, which is a unique resource. Central texts that require direct annotation will be printed. This kind of post? That should be a decision you make as part of your own learning process. 

In the Spaces in Between


Background, Always


Writing is more important than ever In a hypertextual world where the Internet is part of all academic work and part of the work of most jobs. You should learn how to navigate information online, and you should learn how to interact with that information. You should learn how to think in writing with more clarity and cogency and alacrity than the typical person in the comment section of the typical article.

That is one of the purposes of this course website — the one you are currently reading. It affords you a risk-free opportunity to interact with information and ask questions of the person posting that information. You are familiar with the question, “When am I ever going to have to use this?” When it comes to the way you interact with this website, the answer is, “Pretty much every day for the rest of your life.”

In terms of that Future You we so often discuss, you should learn to think in writing and interact with online writing. In terms of this course, you must think in writing, and you must do so in a public space. You must write in response to instruction. You must write reflectively and metacognitively, and you must know the difference between the two. You must ask questions, when you have them; and when you don’t, you must ask yourself why not. You must share information and insight with peers. You must ask for feedback. You must teach each other.

You can do all of this by returning repeatedly to the instructional posts until you’ve exhausted their ability to teach you something. You can only do this, however, if you take notes on those posts. That is not a new requirement. This was the second assignment of the entire year for all students:

Your second assignment is to learn how we can [upend the traditional feedback model entirely] — how, why, and to what extent. First, though, you should recognize that all of this is intended to teach you slowly and over time. You must interact with these instructional posts and documents like you would if assigned annotations. If you let them teach you, you won’t just learn how to do the next assignment; you’ll learn why this all matters, how to be curious about a great many things, how to write, etc.

You must, therefore, recognize that these instructional posts and documents are written explicitly to teach you. They define new vocabulary, link to related readings, and clarify ideas. They are usually structured as a lecture would be, but they are made difficult enough to require effort to parse and process. They deliberately and explicitly demonstrate style that you can emulate in your own writing. In other words, just interacting with these instructional pieces will help you get better at reading, thinking, and writing.

Did you take notes on that instructional post? More critically, did you read that instructional post?


Scripta Manent, Always


You have seen this before:

Verba volant, scripta manent.

“Spoken words fly away, written words remain.” It was the subject of an instructional post from September 28. You should revisit that post, if it has faded from memory, but it would be more useful to revisit the notes you took on it.

On October 16, you were given feedback on your progress:

You should revisit the appropriate post, if it has faded from memory, but it would be more useful to revisit the notes you took on that post, especially on the section titled “Update #3: Interstitial Learning.”

Of course, many of you will not have notes on these posts, nor on any of the other posts you’ve been given over the past three months. That is the issue in front of you today: You must take notes on what you read, beginning with instructional posts. You should use those notes to populate the comment section of posts with observations, insights, questions, and feedback. This is thinking in writing — using the written word to refine and revisit our thoughts, especially as we consider more difficult subject matter and assignments.

For the rest of this week, through Thanksgiving and into the weekend, you must attempt to use the interstitial classroom more effectively. Your primary focus should be the Q&A posts given to you last week. Take notes on any instruction. Answer all prompts in writing. Then extend your observations, insights, questions, feedback, etc., into the comment sections of the posts.

Before you get those Q&A posts, you should revisit/create your notes on Dürer’s Rhinoceros, especially the idea that “[o]ften the simplest or most straightforward GAP evidence is more important than everything else.” Starting with the triptych panel that ends on December 1, a grade abatement profile of 7 requires notes on all instructional posts. Grade abatement profiles of 8 or 9 require evidence of interstitial impact —e.g., meaningful contributions online, especially in the comment sections of instructional posts.

Before you ask: This does not mean that you must leave comments to get an 8 or 9. Not exactly. The interstitial system was set up months ago, however, to encourage you to think about feedback differently, including the habits and habitats you have for learning. You’ve had enough time.

There should always be more activity online for this course. There should always be questions, comments, discussions, etc., because you all want to do well. Whether you define “well” as a high profile or genuinely collaborative growth, this site should be part of the process.

This week, it’s required. All juniors have been given this post, and it needs to become a hub for discussion and feedback:

Q&A: “The Age of the Essay”

AP students have, in addition, this post:

ETA Q&A+: “Alligators” Optional Reading

As an individual, you are responsible for your succinct — succinct! — contributions, plus the way you respond to questions and insights shared by your peers. As a group, you are responsible for the shape of the comment sections themselves. It is, again, about herd immunity: Protecting the group by strengthening as many individuals as possible.


Simulating Rock Bottom, Always


You should take notes on this instructional post, just as you would on any others. What kind of comments can you leave, though? Well, they could be clarifying questions, or observations about the course, or details from your own experience with interstitial learning. But I’ll make it simpler:

https://betterhumans.coach.me/how-to-break-bad-habits-by-simulating-rock-bottom-8e46b5acb027

Respond to that article by connecting it to the universal skills and traits of this course, especially the lifelong need for self-control. Talk about it here, in the comments. Notice that the skills you are practicing — thinking in writing, responding to what’s written online, responding to essays, collaborating, thinking critically, being self-aware, and on and on — are on display here.

(Notice, too, that to see the responses to this article, or to respond yourself, you would need to join Medium, which means a literal premium has been placed on the ability to interact with writers in the real world. It costs money to join the conversation. That, too, is interesting.)

ETA Q&A+: “Alligators” Optional Reading

On losing one’s head, you can’t do much better than the original “Sleepy Hollow.” Oddly enough,clicking this image will just give you the origins of the word “desultory.”

TL;DR — Q2 is when we pick up the pace, so to speak, in AP. Use your developing insight into Paul Graham’s essay to help you analyze, in the way that we value analysis, the texts and emulative work in this folder. You must work collaboratively and interstitially. Every choice matters.


Emulation-through-Analysis


The idea of emulation-through-analysis, or ETA, writing is embedded in the Spitting the Atom post you’ve now seen a half-dozen times. You can only emulate art that you’ve broken down into component pieces. Writing is the most essential art for the Humanities; it requires a granular understanding.

The Q&A post on Paul Graham is a version of ETA work. It walks you through the actionable parts of Graham’s essay, focusing on the metaphors and analogies that develop his argument. In AP, you must now begin to look more deeply and more critically at every essay you are given, which means that Graham should be background for what comes next.

ETA work is convergent, for the most part: There are wrong answers, because you are looking at how the writing is put together. You can misidentify a rhetorical strategy, misinterpret a stylistic choice, and misread the purpose of an essay. It takes expertise to suss this out. That starts with your teacher, but you must be autodidactic and collaborative, too.

Use the interstitial tools of the course and the Internet’s vast resources to learn whatever you can from this post. Maintain your focus on this question: What can we create with this?


ETA Blitzkrieg: Alligators of the Mind


This folder will be shared again when we write our first river-inspired essay:

Alligators of the Mind – Google Drive

Required and “optional” reading for a study of violence in fiction, censorship in schools, and the nature of obscenity.

You saw these materials almost three weeks ago. This post focuses on the ostensibly optional reading1:

Google Docs versions of these texts are in the folder. If you’d like to read the original texts where they were published, use Google to search for the title and author.

The ETA framework for these three texts teaches you rhetorical strategies that can be used your own writing. There are also framing questions on censorship that could be used to generate a focus for that writing. There are, respectively

  • 22 specific strategies and techniques, plus a look at seven overall strategies;
  • 30 specific strategies and techniques, plus a look at 11 overall strategies;
  • 21 specific strategies and techniques, plus a look at seven overall strategies.

There are two versions of that ETA document in the folder, too. Use Google to learn about techniques, terms, and strategies, and focus in class on talking to me about what you are learning.


Self-Control and Foresight


You received all this on October 30. Two or three weeks is more than enough time to read the essays in preparation for a fast-paced look at emulation and analysis. If you didn’t read ahead, that speaks to your organizational strengths and weaknesses, and you need to reflect and be metacognitive about the guillotines flitting about:

The Fatal Flying Guillotine

As I’ve said before, that post will never not be relevant. You are in Q2 now, which serves mostly as a threshold for us to start expecting the most from you, a student in a college-level Humanities makerspace. You have vast, unique resources available to you, and a framework that invites and rewards risk. You must be better than the average.

Use the comments here to talk about any of this, but especially to work on the ETA questions for the optional (read: not really optional) reading.


  1. You now know that “optional” is an invitation to do “more than just what is required,” and that is language from a GAP 8. This work is “optional” only if you are comfortable setting your ceiling for learning, growth, and scoring at a 7. 

Q&A: “The Age of the Essay”


Guided Reading


As you finish reading our essay on essays, focus your analysis and discussion on the following details. Use the comment section here to ask questions, and monitor the comments for my replies and and any feedback from your peers. You will be asked to attach your answers to an assignment on Google Classroom.

¶33 — “Err on the side of the river.” | Break down the river metaphor into actionable language. This is probably the most important metaphor for us in the essay, so make sure it’s clear to you.

¶40 — “At sixteen I was about as observant as a lump of rock.” | This is worth highlighting for a simple reason: You have to be more observant than this, regardless of age. It’s good not to know things, too; that’s the starting place for the next idea.

¶42 — “[T]he more you learn, the more hooks you have for new facts to stick onto — which means you accumulate knowledge at what’s colloquially called an exponential rate.” | Unpack this idea using the next quotation and Graham’s surrounding logic. Again, focus on actionable language — what we can do with this idea.

¶44 — “When it comes to surprises, the rich get richer.” | In context: What does it mean to get richer? How does it connect to writing?

¶45 — “I find it especially useful to ask about things that seems wrong.” | Connect this to the later idea of disobedience. What are you looking for when you search for subjects and approaches for an essay?

¶51 — “Whatever you study, include history — but social and economic history, not political history. History seems to me so important that it’s misleading to treat it as a mere field of study. Another way to describe it is all the data we have so far. | Put this in the context of the entire essay, which you’ll remember starts with a history lesson. Then reflect on your own habits here — your approach to history as Graham describes it, not as a subject in school.


The Main Ingredients


¶38 — “[I]f you want to write essays, you need two ingredients: a few topics you’ve thought about a lot, and some ability to ferret out the unexpected.”

This quotation is separated, under its own subheading, and out of order, so you can focus on it. First, discuss this idea of “ferret[ing] out the unexpected,” connecting it to the idea of “get[ting] deeply enough into it” in ¶39 and “mak[ing] a habit of paying attention to things you’re not supposed to” in ¶53.

Then see what you can do reach back to the start of school, when you got this course’s culinary metaphor:

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I want you to see how things connect, and I want you to think about how we’re going to approach writing for the rest of the year. Take the time to reflect on this. Analyze your own habits, including what you think about a lot, what you’re “not supposed to” pay attention to, etc., and write some of this insight in the comments here to start an interstitial discussion.

Quick update: Below is an essay that fits this idea of river-writing almost perfectly. It’s also an example of the outside limits of what’s possible in a makerspace like ours. If you have the time, read it, and then fold it into your discussion of Graham:

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If you want to see what essays in the real world look like, why they matter, etc., start with that.

RE/AP Updates (11/14)


Ono. Quizzes


I gave you all these quizzes (that aren’t quizzes) recently:

Two interesting things happened as a result of this. First, you all were eerily focused for a few days on just filling in those boxes. The second, unrelated thing is that I realized these quizzes were a bad idea.

My original intention was to provide traditional feedback to some of you in the form of handwritten commentary and scores out of 100 points, thereby empowering you to teach others about the content of the quiz. The scores wouldn’t count, of course, but I thought they might let us weaponize that lizard part of your brain again. Hence this:

Except, well… that last hyperlink (“that lizard part of your brain“) is to a post called “How Feedback Should Work,” and everything we’ve done since then is expressly about pushing the boulder away from the Pavlovian, Skinner-boxed logic of the system. Attaching a point value to your work is toxic, even as a symbolic exercise. You don’t need unilateral commentary to teach each other, either. Feedback can’t be forced; that defeats (or at least undercuts) the purpose, which is to give you a universal language for learning and writing while encouraging you to experiment and grow as students.

Instead of focusing on these quizzes (again, not quizzes), I want you to focus on the links in this post, if you need to look at them again, the full scope of the instructional post given before reading Graham, and the Q&A that will be posted later tonight.


Walking Deadlines


Except for the assignment due on November 6 — the one that asked you to respond to The Aft Agley Gang and The Ironic Use of TL;DR — you won’t have any formal deadlines in Google Classroom for the rest of the month. Instead, you must use the space and each other to organize your work, keep goals in front of you, and track your learning.

This is an extension of our look at self-control. If you want to see why that is, read the sixth section of this essay:

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That conversation between Malcolm Gladwell and Bill Simmons touches on the psychological danger of preparing, since it makes your performance entirely about your ability, not some outside factor. For a while, at least, you won’t be able to self-medicate through deadlines in here, so let’s see what we can do to avoid other forms of self-handicapping. (The opening of that essay also shows you what kind of abomination my traditional gradebooks were, along with other interesting perspectives on the course.)

Remember, too, that there is a date on which we pause to determine a GAP score. This time, it’s December 1. See the calendar again for more information:

Ask questions about these updates below.