Credit Recovery


Credit Recovery


TL;DR — If you have no evidence of work by the end of this quarter, you may be given an incomplete and required to take a summer course of Edgenuity. You do not want this, so you should do the assigned work.

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Your final projects are due over the next two weeks.

To prepare for this, you’ve been asked to check in each day, to set goals based on that week’s part of the final project, and to use a feedback chain to revise and refine each step. If you fell behind over the last month, you were given two posts to help you catch up:

You also have a post about finding your motivation during this pandemic:

Finding Your Motivation

The question we must ask is this: What happens if you don’t complete any work by the end of the quarter?

Start by recognizing how hard it is to fail. In this makerspace, you are helped tremendously by the aggregate nature of grade abatement:

Clarifying Grade Abatement

A profile score of 3 becomes a 65, and that profile’s language is largely about resistance to feedback and a lack of any positive movement. That is still a “passing” score. If you do even less, even when contacted repeatedly across an entire quarter, you might fit the profile of a 2, which is a 60.

This is not a floating standard. It is a recognition of the cumulative nature of true learning and the vector-like toxicity of grades, as that “Clarifying Grade Abatement” post explains.

In other words, if you are able to do enough work to meet the criteria overall of a GAP score of 3 or 4, you have authentically and legitimately passed the course. You would be obviously weak in basic skills and traits, but that would not mean numerical failure is appropriate.

The school is also making exceptions for you during Q4 if there are extenuating circumstances. Those exceptions fit our set of universal skills and traits, too: To establish those extenuating circumstances, you have to communicate with us, show self-awareness and a sense of self-efficacy, accept feedback about your situation, and much more.

So the real question is this: What happens if you don’t complete any work by the end of the quarter and haven’t communicated about an exemption? What if you really have done nothing, even after being contacted?

Well, here is one possibility:

If you have no evidence of work by the end of this quarter, you may be required to take a summer course of Edgenuity.

As the TL;DR at the top of this post says, you do not want this, so you should do the assigned work.


About Edgenuity


Before we look at how Edgenuity works, be sure that you have read the BCSD letter sent to the community on April 16:

You will also want to have looked at the post on motivation, since it dives more deeply into what motivates you, how that shifts during distance learning, what happens if you fall behind, and much more. Some of what is written below is lifted directly from that post.

The district’s letter explains, among other things, how and why traditional grades have been eliminated for Q4. Instead of a score on your report card, you’ll be given a Pass/Incomplete (or Pass/Fail) for each course.

Recognize that you’ve lost grades as a motivator after being institutionalized for a decade or more. Removing the Skinner box would be difficult without a pandemic. You may need another extrinsic motivation.

That’s what Edgenuity can be: an extrinsic motivation for some of you. More precisely, avoiding it can be an extrinsic motivation for some of you.

If you aren’t aware of the program, here is Edgenuity’s explanation of credit recovery:

Edgenuity’s credit recovery courses are designed to help students learn at their own pace and on their own time. The flexibility and design of these courses empower students to focus on exactly the content they need to in order to catch up to their peers, recover lost credits, and graduate on time.

You can click the link for more at the official site. It is a program designed as another chance, and while that is a good thing, it is also a last resort. Your assigned English work will always offer you more choice and enjoyment.

The following examples will show you how Edgenuity works. After reading, you should understand that meeting the criteria for your assigned Q4 work will be easier and more student-centered than having to come in (virtually or not) to do Edgenuity over the summer.

Start by enlarging this screenshot of an Edgenuity unit that ends with a quiz:

This is part of the Common Core ELA curriculum for NY. You can see the units that are prescribed by the state and Edgenuity on the left side of the image. The units that are checked have been assigned; the rest have been eliminated.

If you are required to do Edgenuity, a teacher or other educator will go into the Common Core ELA curriculum, remove enough units to line up with the required hours, and then assign it to you.

Now note the time required for each lesson, unit, quiz, etc. The highlighted lesson, on sound and structure in poetry, requires an hour. That lesson is part of unit requiring more than seven hours.

The time you spend is all tracked, and you have to do all of it. You can’t skip ahead. You can’t rush. You are required to follow the program.

Zoom in on the poetry lesson:

This is an example of how you lose flexibility when you move from your assigned ELA work to Edgenuity: You must warm up, go through the instruction, do the assignment, go through the next set of instructions, review, and take a quiz, and you have to do it in exactly the prescribed order.

Edgenuity excels at this sort of structure by eliminating almost all flexibility. To generate enough data, the program can’t tailor the learning and assessment to your needs. There’s very little differentiation, especially in the moment.

That’s why doing the assigned work for Q4 is preferable: Even through the hurdles of distance learning, you have teachers and other educators racing to meet you where you are. In Edgenuity, the driving force is a computer program. You necessarily lose the feedback and attention you need.

There are humans involved in Edgenuity, of course. The quizzes and tests are controlled and assessed by the educator overseeing the curriculum. But if you are required to complete Edgenuity over the summer, that educator likely won’t be your current teacher. You’d replace someone who’s spent a year getting to know you as an individual student with someone who may never see your face.

Here is an Edgenuity lesson that includes a writing assignment:

Writing-based lessons in Edgenuity are prescribed for you, just like everything else. This one requires almost three hours. The process is rigid: You must submit your writing, get some feedback, revise the writing, etc, and if that’s all normal, the rigid time constraints are not.

Your writing units will also include quizzes, even when that kind of assessment doesn’t quite fit. Again, this is a computer program: Quizzes and time-on-task are the easiest ways to generate data. It’s not necessarily about you. It’s about getting data to analyze.

Writing in Edgenuity is assessed according to rubrics and according to universal ideas of effectiveness, just like in any ELA course. Here is one Edgenuity rubric:

The standard for effectiveness is similar to what you’d see in any English class, because writing is a universal process with modular elements. The specific vocabulary and labels change, not the core components. There is much less margin for error in Edgenuity, however, because you are working against the clock, without easy access to face-to-face feedback.

Revision, for instance, is assigned as a 30-minute process. There is less time to go back and earn more points or a higher score, and you are graded in Edgenuity, regardless of the policy in place elsewhere. You will receive scores out of 100, pandemic or not.

The work, therefore, is more regimented and less student-centered. It is less engaging. It does not easily adapt to your circumstances, and you will always receive numerical grades.


Your Motivation, Again


The goal of distance learning is to provide you meaningful opportunities to learn, flexibility in how you reach goals, and authentic projects that showcase your skills and knowledge. Your teachers and administrators — all faculty and staff — are doing what we can to get you through this unprecedented time in our lives.

That’s why you’re being assessed this quarter through a Pass/Incomplete or Pass/Fail system. You are being given the flexibility you need to handle everything else going on.

Remember, too, that you have teachers streamlining requirements and adapting instruction almost daily. As long as you make a good-faith effort to do the work, you will be given the benefit of the doubt.

In here, we actually talked at length about that good-faith contract and the effort required to be successful during distance learning:

April 1, 2020

What Edgenuity adds to the discussion is an extrinsic motivation for students who require it. You should do the work assigned this quarter, advocating for yourself along the way, in order to avoid Edgenuity.

It’s also important to note that extra chances and modifications are built into the post-COVID learning you’re doing. It’s ultimately easier for all students to do what is assigned, when it is assigned, to the best of their abilities.

There is even an understanding that making a bad choice is not always a malicious act. It rarely is, in fact. All of us succumb to procrastination and other bad habits, which is why we spent part of the fall in this makerspace talking about akrasia:

The Return of the Fatal Flying Guillotine

Remember the phrase we had hanging in our room: Video meliora, proboque deteriora sequor. “I see and approve of the better, but I follow the worse.” It’s a human failing.

All of which is to say this:

You can do the English work assigned this quarter. You have time. It doesn’t matter what today’s date is. You also have a lot of folks to help you. We can tailor the work to your needs.

Feel free to ask questions below. Again, if anything about this situation changes, you’ll be informed immediately.

A Horse to Water

Click the image for an explanation of the idiom, “You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make him drink.”

NOTE: This is a post for students in P1 Regents English Prep only. If you’re in RE11 or AP11 and you’re reading this, you’re going to be very confused by the end of it.

I’m moving instructional posts for our Regents English Prep class from Google Classroom to this website, because I need more space to talk to you. For now, the comment section will be locked; if you have questions or concerns, send me an email, or use the comment section of Google Classroom.

Read this post carefully. A photocopy will be made for you, but the purpose of using this website is to give you anytime/anywhere access to instruction. The word for this is interstitial: occupying the space between other structures. Read when you can, as often as you can.


Practice Exam Adjustments


Back on September 10, you began the Aug. ’17 Regents Exam:

Aug. ’17 Regents Exam – Google Drive

Practice materials for the Aug. ’17 ELA Regents Exam. Includes scored exemplars, multiple-choice answers, and printable rubrics.

My original intention was to divide and conquer. You would complete each part, receive a score, and then analyze your performance. I hoped to return your scores with each assignment. There has been so much missing work, however, that we need to adjust. Look carefully at the spreadsheet below:

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You can also load this document in a separate window by clicking here. You will need your student number to locate the row with your scores for each part of the exam. Note the use of weighted scores for Part 2 and Part 3, plus the conversion chart that produces the final scale score.

If you see blank boxes, I do not have those pieces from you. You need to go to Google Classroom, find the assignment for each part of the practice exam, and then complete it. I will do what I can to save us time — by going through and counting up your multiple-choice score, for instance — but the quickest way to see your predicted score is to submit your work digitally.


Skinner Boxes


Once we have a score for your exam, I will work with you on a regimen that gets you ready for the real thing. We will start with a test called the SRI. It measures a few key aspects of your reading abilities, and we can use it to assign you articles and even books that will improve your close reading skills. Then we will study test-taking strategies, multiple-choice strategies, etc, in small groups and individually.

These first two months have always been about establishing that kind of baseline. As the cliché goes, this is a marathon, not a sprint, and your grade will continue to reflect this. Grade abatement makes this clear, but I can make it clearer still: Do every formal assignment, and when you’re done, ask for something else to do; stay busy during every class; take another crack at a timed essay or multiple choice passage every few weeks or so; and then, barring disaster, you will see a 95 or 100 in Infinite Campus.

Here is the grade abatement handout:

Grade Abatement Profiles with Universal Skills/Traits

And here is a guide to how critical in-class focus and feedback are to your success:

These are posted around the room, as well. The main requirement for success is productivity during the class period, as you can see. There shouldn’t be much need for homework.

Now, a few notes on how you are currently performing:

First, students who scored an 80 or higher on the Aug. ’17 exam probably do not need the focused test prep of this course. If you are in this group, I have already reached out to your guidance counselor to start the conversation about remaining in here. I will reach out to you and your parents next. The goal is to give you the resources you need in an environment that helps you, and someone with a 94 on a practice exam is likely to be frustrated by the requirements of this class.

That group is relatively small, though. The second group is a little larger, and includes students who are working hard but still struggling to finish the practice exam. This group can take its time, and I’ll help you work on strategies as you finish. If you finished and scored low, you have plenty of time to improve. The goal is the real exam in January and/or June. We’ll focus on self-efficacy, self-awareness, and all sort of non-academic skills and traits that will help you.

The last group has a different concern: You aren’t doing the work, and you aren’t trying to do the work. If you know that is the case, and no penalty or benefit has changed your mind, you need to be honest about that with yourself, your parents, and your guidance counselor. Everyone who cares about your success hopes you make a different decision, but we can’t force you. You’re far too old for us to have a bring-a-horse-to-water debate.

Remember that almost all of you in this third group are taking an English class other than this one, and in that class, you will do a significant amount of Regents Exam prep. All English classes, regardless of the amount of explicit test prep assigned, teach the skills and traits you need for the ELA Regents. And in those other classes, you will be forced to make better choices. You need the credit to graduate.

This course is not required for graduation, and it will only help you if you invest in it. It cannot be a study hall. Treat it that way, and you may be forced to explain yourself repeatedly to administration, counselors, parents, etc.; you definitely will fail; and there won’t be any increase in your ability to do well on the real exam, whenever you take it.

In other words, for those of you in this third group, this is one of the only opportunities in high school you have to stop being a rat in a Skinner box. You can leave the cage, if you absolutely know that you won’t do the work. Again, the people who care about you hope you make a different choice, but we also hope that you see the need for the classroom environment to be conducive to the second group mentioned above — the students who need help.

To recap:

  1. If you scored high on the practice exam, you won’t benefit from staying in here. This is Group #1.
  2. If you are struggling to perform well, but working hard, this is the course for you. This is Group #2.
  3. If you refuse to do the work, you won’t benefit from staying in here. This is Group #3.

Figure out where you are, talk to me about your next steps, and let’s make some important decisions together.

 

Lights and Tunnels: RE10, Part 2

Part 2 of a two-part series that probably isn’t going to be renewed for another season. Low ratings, naturally.


RE10 Final Exam Work


The final exam for this course will be given on Monday, June 19, at 8AM. (You can see the rest of the final exam schedule by clicking here.) It is a two-hour exam. Room assignments will be made closer to the exam date; we will post locations in class and on Google Classroom as soon as they’re available. The exam itself will have two parts: timed multiple-choice questions and a timed essay.

Each of the subsections below is a required assignment that will prepare you for the exam. We will also tie that test-centered work to metacognition, collaboration, organization, and most other GAP skills and traits. You will need to read directions closely, work steadily, and ask questions as you go. Your final two GAP scores depend on this work, as does your final exam score.

When you practice, you will need to take Part 1 silently and individually, using your computer only to enter your answers when you get to the step that requires Google Forms. We have to invoke the cemetery rows of traditional testing in order to get the most accurate data.

You will also need to take Part 2 silently and individually, writing by hand first, and then using your computer only as necessary to access backup copies of materials, including any required GARAS lessons. Note that these GARAS lessons are hyperlinked below, but the link goes to a scanned copy of the textbook; the printed, collated packet is much easier to use, so you will be asked to work offline whenever possible.

This instructional post is a checklist, too, when it is printed. Each of the Unicode boxes next to a bolded term or phrase is meant to be checked off as you complete a section of the exam prep. Monitor Google Classroom for deadlines and submission requirements.


☐ Part 1: August ’14

This is the multiple-choice section of the August ’14 ELA Regents Exam. There are three passages and 24 multiple-choice questions. Here is the section in full, followed by the required steps you must take:

 

☐ Practice the Multiple-Choice

  1. Read and annotate ☐ Passage A.
  2. Answer the multiple-choice questions for ☐ Passage A, circling your answer in the exam packet.
  3. Repeat Steps 1-2 for ☐ Passage B and ☐ Passage C.
  4. Enter your answers for all 24 questions in the Google Form below.

☐ Complete the Google Form

☐ Complete the Metacognition

  1. Get the correct answers for all 24 questions from the Google Form.
  2. For ☐ Passage A, write a metacognitive breakdown of your work, including both correct and incorrect answers.
  3. Work with peers and your teachers to ☐ develop that metacognitive breakdown into an understanding of your strengths and weaknesses on this type of passage.
  4. Repeat Step 2-3 for ☐ Passage B and ☐ Passage C.

☐ Part 2: August ’14

This is the source-based argument prompt from the August ’14 ELA Regents Exam. Here is the section in full, followed by the required steps you must take:

 

☐ Practice the Source-Based Essay

  1. Read and annotate the ☐ Directions, ☐ Topic, ☐ Task, and ☐ Guidelines.
  2. Read and annotate each of the four sources: ☐ Text 1, ☐ Text 2, ☐ Text 3, and ☐ Text 4.
  3. Write an ☐ essay response to this prompt in the provided Regents booklet.

☐ Copy the Exemplar Essay

  1. Read and annotate the ☐ rubric for Part 2, which can be downloaded by clicking here.
  2. Copy by hand the entirety of ☐ Anchor Paper – Part 2 – Level 6 – A, which can be downloaded by clicking here.
  3. Read and annotate the ☐ state’s scoring explanation for Anchor Level 6A, which immediately follows the model paper itself.
  4. Repeat Steps 2-3 with ☐ Anchor Paper – Part 2 – Level 6 – B and the ☐ state’s scoring explanation, both of which can be downloaded by clicking here.

☐ Grammar as Rhetoric and Style

  1. Identify ☐ examples of the GARAS lessons in your own essay by annotating and analyzing the effect of any or all of the following:
  2. Identify ☐ examples of grammar as rhetoric and style in either of the anchor papers (6A or 6B) by annotating and analyzing the effect of any or all of the following:

☐ Complete the Metacognition

  1. Outline a ☐ metacognitive analysis of your own essay, using details from the rubric for Part 2, the two anchor papers, your understanding of the four GARAS exercises, and the state’s scoring explanation for both anchor papers.
  2. Work with peers and your teachers to develop that metacognitive outline into a ☐ response that explores your strengths and weaknesses on this type of essay.

☐ Part 1: August ’16

Note: You will complete Part 1 of the Aug. ’16 exam when you finish Part 1 and Part 2 of the Aug. ’14 exam. Depending on how long the Aug. ’14 exam takes and your own needs, you may skip Part 1 of the Aug. ’16 exam to practice Part 2.

This is the multiple-choice section of the August ’16 ELA Regents Exam. There are three passages and 24 multiple-choice questions. We will complete this practice on an individual basis or if it is otherwise necessary for us to complete it. Here is the section in full, followed by the required steps you must take (which are identical to the steps for Part 1 of the August ’14 exam):

 

☐ Practice the Multiple-Choice

  1. Read and annotate ☐ Passage A.
  2. Answer the multiple-choice questions for ☐ Passage A, circling your answer in the exam packet.
  3. Repeat Steps 1-2 for ☐ Passage B and ☐ Passage C.
  4. Enter your answers for all 24 questions in the Google Form below.

☐ Complete the Google Form

☐ Complete the Metacognition

  1. Get the correct answers for all 24 questions from the Google Form.
  2. For ☐ Passage A, write a metacognitive breakdown of your work, including both correct and incorrect answers.
  3. Work with peers and your teachers to ☐ develop that metacognitive breakdown into an understanding of your strengths and weaknesses on this type of passage.
  4. Repeat Step 2-3 for ☐ Passage B and ☐ Passage C.

☐ Part 2: August ’16

Note: You will complete Part 2 of the Aug. ’16 exam when you finish Part 1 and Part 2 of the Aug. ’14 exam. Depending on how long the Aug. ’14 exam takes and your own needs, you may skip directly to this essay practice.

This is the source-based argument prompt from the August ’16 ELA Regents Exam. Here is the section in full, followed by the required steps you must take:

 

☐ Practice the Source-Based Essay

  1. Read and annotate the ☐ Directions, ☐ Topic, ☐ Task, and ☐ Guidelines.
  2. Read and annotate each of the four sources: ☐ Text 1, ☐ Text 2, ☐ Text 3, and ☐ Text 4.
  3. Write an ☐ essay response to this prompt in the provided Regents booklet.

☐ Copy the Exemplar Essay

  1. Read and annotate the ☐ rubric for Part 2, which can be downloaded by clicking here.
  2. Copy by hand the entirety of ☐ Anchor Paper – Part 2 – Level 6 – A, which can be downloaded by clicking here.
  3. Read and annotate the ☐ state’s scoring explanation for Anchor Level 6A, which immediately follows the model paper itself.
  4. Repeat Steps 2-3 with ☐ Anchor Paper – Part 2 – Level 6 – B and the ☐ state’s scoring explanation, both of which can be downloaded by clicking here.
  1. Identify ☐ examples of the GARAS lessons in your own essay by annotating and analyzing the effect of any or all of the following:
  2. Identify ☐ examples of grammar as rhetoric and style in either of the anchor papers (6A or 6B) by annotating and analyzing the effect of any or all of the following:

☐ Complete the Metacognition

  1. Outline a ☐ metacognitive analysis of your own essay, using details from the rubric for Part 2, the two anchor papers, your understanding of the four GARAS exercises, and the state’s scoring explanation for both anchor papers.
  2. Work with peers and your teachers to develop that metacognitive outline into a ☐ response that explores your strengths and weaknesses on this type of essay

Pre-AP Work: AP11 Summer Reading


Note: This is the required summer reading for students moving into AP11 next year. If you are not taking AP English Language and Composition as a junior, you can ignore this part of the post entirely.

The Reading

The summer reading for AP11 is taken from the beginning of a college-level textbook on reading, writing, and rhetoric. This textbook, The Language of Composition, gives the background necessary for the work we’ll do next year.

Each of the first four chapters has been scanned and archived below on the BHS server. You can only access these chapters through your Brewster account, just like you can only access hard copies of the textbook in our classroom. Photocopies of these chapters will be made available, and you can sign out a copy of the textbook for a few days at a time. If you’d like your own copy, here is the link to buy it on Amazon.

Note: The glossary is also being included this year.

The Thinking and Writing

As you read, take notes. Make observations. Connect what you learn to yourself and your environment as often and as authentically as possible. The terms you will encounter are important, but always less important than the ideas. To quote another introduction to rhetoric:

Don’t be scared of the intimidating detail suggested by the odd Greek and Latin terms. After all, you can enjoy the simple beauty of a birch tree without knowing it is Betula alba and make use of the shade of a weeping willow without knowing it is in fact Salix babylonica. The same is possible with rhetoric. The names aid categorization and are more or less conventional, but I encourage you to get past the sesquipedalian labels and observe the examples and the sample criticism (rhetoric in practice). It is beyond the definitions that the power of rhetoric is made apparent.

That is from the Forest of Rhetoric, a site that could teach you nearly as much as The Language of Composition, if you allowed yourself to spend some time studying its many branches. You could also learn nearly as much by reading the excellent Thank You for Arguing, by Jay Heinrichs, which is on Amazon here. Heinrichs’ book used to be the required AP summer reading. There are certainly many other introductions out there.

The point of that last paragraph is that the basics of rhetoric and argument and logic are timeless. These are the bones of discourse and understanding in life. You never stop learning them, but you need some sort of substructure before you can experiment, build, and iterate, which are the goals of the Humanities makerspace in Room 210.

As always, I’m your expert and mentor, so you should ask questions and seek advice as you get going. You’ll notice that you have nothing due — no journals, no impending tests, no deadlines. The most I will ask you to do is to register for the course through Google Classroom. The work is due, in the sense that anything is due, on the first day of school, but the work will continue through the last day. Everything matters, not just those soritical moments of summative assessment.