November 6, 2019


Drawn and Quartered: Q1


The first quarter ends next Friday. You will complete the last GAP report for Q1 on Thursday, November 14.

Take some time this weekend to review the assessment essentials for our course:

Clarifying Grade Abatement
Grade Abatement Profiles
Universal Skills and Traits
Step-By-Step Guide to Assessment
2019-2020 Calendar of Assessment
2019-2020 Student GAP Reports

The complete list is available through several menus on this site.


Current Writing Assignments


Today, you have two assignments due:

  1. The Skill of Empathy
  2. Reading Check: 11/6/19

The “reading check” will collect data about your progress in The Things They Carried. You must also write a short response.

The other assignment was posted on October 29, after you had read through the instructional background on empathy and Chad Fowler’s essay.

By the end of today, you should have practiced empathy in four ways. For each, you should have a written response and some metacognitive analysis.

Your next essay will continue into Q2:

River Writing: On Empathy

Read the prompt carefully. You will use the universal guide to write, which means you will need to discuss possible subjects and approaches in class before you begin.

Ask questions about this essay in class and in the comment section of the post. Use the comment section below to ask about this post’s overview of your work.

Note: You will be given a complete breakdown of our upcoming work on The Things They Carried. For now, continue to read at your own pace.

October 27, 2019

Example of a Penrose staircase.


Back to Basics: Why Basic Assignments Matter Most


Perhaps the most notable similarity between a GAP score of 8 and a GAP score of 4 is the emphasis on basic assignments. If you complete these basic tasks, a final grade of 90 is likely; if you don’t, a final grade of 70 might be the highest you can go.

Tier Four: “Required Assignments”

Tier Two: “Basic Requirements”

In terms of skills, let’s use the metaphor of steps:

You’re asked to climb. If you skip the first step, you can probably stretch and get to the second. Some of you can take two steps at a time to get where we’re going.

But if you stop climbing, or if you refuse to take the majority of those first steps, you don’t move up.

You also can’t start at the top of the stairs, or even halfway up them; you have to take those first steps first.


GAP Triage


When you load the relevant spreadsheet file, you’ll find color-coded feedback arranged by period and student number.

Before you do that: Do not read this mathematically. Do not compare different rows. These data are part of a larger narrative, and you will absolutely get that narrative wrong if you go looking at other people’s feedback.

There is no efficient way to flip teacher notes to you than what I’ve done here. This alone takes the better part of a weekend. Do not mistake this for anything but part of the larger narrative.

Note, too, that this includes only basic assignments. You had many more assignments over the last month:

  • “Why Read?” Response
  • Response to WIP GAP: 10/11
  • Goodreads Response
  • River Essay #1
  • Ongoing Pareto Projects

Discrepancies in final GAP scores are a result of these assignments, which were given feedback separately and constitute the more meaningful and personalized parts of the course.

Triage, as we’re using the metaphor here, is about showcasing for some of you where the damage is. It’s about treating those wounds.

The following post explains how to read these spreadsheets. This is required reading if you’d like to make sense of those zeros, ones, and twos:

GAP Score Triage: Overview

Understand that this information is being shared to help you understand the need to complete basic assignments. That’s the goal: to run triage for as many students as possible as efficiently as possible.

These data should also help you see the repercussions of good and bad choices. It will put it, as that post argues, into Skinner-box triggers anyone can understand. This is not the usual way to share feedback on your progress.

It is also always relevant that posting grades online is destructive to your learning:

It’s not enough to disseminate grades more efficiently — for example, by posting them online. There is a growing technology, as the late Gerald Bracey once remarked, “that permits us to do in nanoseconds things that we shouldn’t be doing at all” (quoted in Mathews, 2006). In fact, posting grades online is a significant step backward because it enhances the salience of those grades and therefore their destructive effects on learning.

Posting these zeros and ones in Infinite Campus would be detrimental to you. It would also communicate absolutely no new information at that time. It would warp and disrupt the learning process.

Again, this is explained in the post on GAP triage. You must read those directions before reacting limbically to these numbers. You should absolutely not compare your row to anyone else’s. You would be operating without the information you need, and you’d be learning the wrong lesson from these data.

In brief: If you are missing work, that is obvious; if the work is insufficient or incomplete, that, too, is obvious:

Insufficient vs. Sufficient Work

All assignments can be easily checked through Google Classroom. You should also have notes on face-to-face feedback, plenty of typed feedback through Google Docs and Classroom, etc.

So these are the basics. These are the first steps. The spreadsheet, again, doesn’t include any of the larger responses, like your river essay, because those bigger assignments can only be assessed effectively after you’ve done these basic assignments.

That’s how you need to read this triage spreadsheet. It shows the basic, simple, easy stuff that you have weeks, sometimes, to finish. Doing these simple tasks allows us to apply a makerspace mentality to your more elevated writing, reading, and so on; not doing them prevents you making any real progress until you do complete them.

Note that this will be a live link on 10/28:

  • Spreadsheets for All Classes: GAP Q1B Triage [PDF]

A copy of that PDF will also be sent to you through Google Classroom. Below is a brief description of each assignment in the order they are listed in this triage spreadsheet.

Final GAP Score | What’s now posted in Infinite Campus. Unpack it with the profiles, skills and traits, and GAP guide. Ask for clarification.

WIP GAP Score [9/27] | See the post from October 2, 2019 and the explanation of WIP GAP scores.

Self-Reported GAP Score | If you don’t communicate where you think you are, no one can redirect you, validate you, conference with you, etc. If this number is off by more than one profile from your actual Q1B score, schedule a conference. See this year’s organizing post.

Self-Analysis ¶ | The self-reported GAP score is useless without this. If you don’t communicate why you selected a particular score, you might as well be guessing. Note, too, that if you don’t write enough to provide insight, this paragraph is a nonstarter.

Daily Calibration Check | This is required. I looked at a day when most students were present and had many ongoing assignments to work on.

In-Class Rubicon [10/7+10/8] | Two days considered together. See the post on October 8 for more. If you aren’t using class time well, you can’t expect to do well.

In-Class Rubicon [WIP: 9/27] | You especially can’t expect to do well after being warned, again and again, that you have to be on-task in class.

Guided Analysis: Graham | These are the traditional analysis questions that allow you to write freely on different subjects with that universal writing process guide. There probably isn’t a more important assignment from Q1.

Edpuzzle: Question 5 | This was a five-minute video accompanied by five questions. These are the basic questions that let us study literature without quizzes, traditional tests, etc. After the analysis of Graham, there probably isn’t a more important assignment from Q1, and the most important question is this one, from the end of the video.

Summer Reading Form | You could do this in two minutes, if you didn’t read. If you did read, this became the basis of the next week’s more in-depth writing response. Either way, it’s a simple form.


Note on Late Work


In many cases, assignment deadlines are waived, at least in terms of meeting those “basic requirements.” If you get it done, it still has value, so it counts.

The lateness counts, too, however. if it takes you weeks to finish something, you still have all the other steps to take. You’re now behind. You have to work faster to catch up.

There’s also a point after which the feedback you could have gotten is no longer possible. That’s why you might have completed something after the deadline, probably after the end of the Q1B panel, and not see it reflected here. We can “fix” that, by which I mean that we can adjust your profile, if possible, by meeting to go over the evidence.

The more important consideration is why you’re getting any work in so late that it isn’t reflected here. Of course we should get you the credit you deserve; the greater concern, however, is that you’re not meeting deadlines, even when those deadlines are flexible.

To use the metaphor of steps again: You can’t sprint up the steps at the last second without the risk of tripping, stumbling backward, and landing back at the start.

Note, too, that your teachers are always here to help you get to the top of those metaphorical stairs. We’re with you, as you walk, to the extent you need us. There even are escalators for some of you to use.

Ask questions below.

October 22, 2019


The Act of Giving It Your Attention


Start today by reading this, which comes from the Head of School at Wooster:

[S]creens and the internet are causing us all to slowly lose the ability to do what is called “deep reading.” In the meantime, I’m going to keep asking you all to give me your attention in this way: Reading deeply, and then thinking deeply and reflecting. Questions are a part of the process too, and I am happy to answer them at any time. Even if you don’t agree with the content, or it makes you slightly uncomfortable, just the act of giving it your attention, and thinking deeply about it, is good for your brain. In this age of distraction and sound bites, it gives me great joy to help our community members retain and strengthen the gift of deeper reading.

Like our own discussion of online reading, what this doesn’t say is as important as what it does say. We’ve known for a long time now that the Internet is shallowing our brains — Nicholas Carr’s The Shallows is one of the best journalistic books on the subject — but that is a problem with how we use the Internet, not the Internet itself.

We all need help “retain[ing] and strengthen[ing] the gift of deeper reading.” It’s a habit you can only build over time, but it’s as Matt Byrnes says here: “[J]ust the act of giving it your attention, and thinking deeply about it, is good for your brain.”

This is why I write to you instructionally. Put simply, it’s good for your brain to read this sort of thing, even if it makes you uncomfortable.

Today, your reading is a soft reboot of the makerspace itself:

What Is a (Humanities) Makerspace?

Walk yourself through the entire post. Plug in to watch the video. Skim attached articles. At this point, you’ve been in the space long enough to experience the practical application of these ideas, so you should also consider your own work.

This “deep reading” will contextualize today’s assignment, too. You have reached another inflection point for grade abatement profiling, which means another moment to self-assess, collaborate, and recommit to the work of the space.

Remember that this kind of assessment also requires you to read deeply, to consider uncomfortable truths, to question, etc., in order to think deeply and reflect accurately on your progress. As necessary, you would use the links in the “Essentials Pack” for assessment, which is available in several places online and in class:

Clarifying Grade Abatement
Grade Abatement Profiles
Universal Skills and Traits
Step-By-Step Guide to Assessment
WIP GAP Scores Explained
2019-2020 Calendar of Assessment
2019-2020 Student GAP Reports

The assignment itself is on Google Classroom. The form provides you ample opportunity for honest self-assessment, since it links repeatedly to these other “deep dives” into your learning.

For today, this work is about you, the individual, taking on the sometimes uncomfortable task of deep reading. It’s also about you, the individual, completing the often uncomfortable task of self-assessment.

Plug in, focus, and work. Ask questions in person, but also ask them here, or through email. When in doubt, just ask. Use your voice to be part of the discussion.

Note: The deadline for your GAP reports will be extended to tomorrow to give you time for this. We will still distribute your next novel tomorrow.

October 15, 2019


Goodreads and Summer Reading


This week, you only meet in class twice; the rest of the time, you will need to use the interstitial mechanisms of the course to stay on top of your work. That’s a good thing. One of the skills you need moving forward is the ability to regulate yourself without constant supervision. You have to beat back any learned helplessness before you graduate.

And, as always, this is about making connections between lessons and lectures while making you stronger readers. That’s why you have to get used to flipped instruction, and it’s why the first part of the latest assignment on Google Classroom tells you to read this post:

Good Reads and Goodreads

That post connects to the reading you should have done at the beginning of the year, the assignment you should have done last week, the work we’ve done on writing and discussion, and a dozen other elements of this space.

If you have done your work diligently, this is the logical next step. It will make sense. If you have not done your work recently, you’ll have to catch up, as you’d expect.

Note: A copy of the assignment from Google Classroom is below the rest of today’s announcements and updates.

You have a week to figure out this writing response, although Friday’s class period should be reserved for passion projects and college essays. That further makes this Goodreads assignment a test of your ability to use the resources available to you to do good work without relying on someone to spoon-feed you answers.


College Essays: Walking Deadlines


On the subject of college essays, working on them remains on the menu of choices through October 25. That will be the last day you can elect to workshop an essay, meet with a teacher, peer edit, etc., during the class period.

After October 25, you can still get help on the essay, but you’ll have to schedule time outside of class for it. Remember that this writing assignment has its own deadline, which is the actual application deadline for the schools you’ve chosen.


Upcoming Novel: The Things They Carried


Once we’re through this week, we’ll start The Things They Carried. There’s no formal assignment until the novel is distributed, but you might want to read more about it on Goodreads:


From Google Classroom: Goodreads Assignment


Due on October 21. GAP Q1B ends with a formal score on October 22.

Your assignment is to use the resources of the makerspace — time, feedback, peers, and a new resource in Goodreads — to write about one of the BHS summer reading books for 2019.

You can do this, if you read your chosen book, by using last week’s writing (Summer Reading in the Fall) and the instructional post attached below. It will be a straightforward response based on your experience of the text, our background reading, and the reading you do on Goodreads.

If you did not read a book from the list, choose one now. You can find the complete list in a post from the first week of school: http://sisypheanhigh.com/malachite/?p=3316. Once you’ve chosen a book, you can head over to Goodreads and read about it.

What you write can be driven by our universal process, which you can find linked again below, but it may be more useful to discuss your ideas in person, online, over email, etc., as you decide what to create after you log into Goodreads, look up your particular book, and enter that conversation.

To give it a list’s structure:

1) Download the app or load the website for Goodreads.
2) Register a new account, or decide to revisit this step later.
3) Search for the book in question — in this case, your choice from the list.
4) Dive into the writing and other data on Goodreads about this book.
5) Discuss what you find, in writing and in person, with peers and your teacher.
6) Write a response — the one you are assigned, the one you choose to write, the one inspired by the writing process, etc.
7) Decide whether or not to post the finished response to Goodreads.
8) If you publish to the site, wait to see if you get feedback. Otherwise, get feedback in the usual way.

Ask questions in the comment section below, in class, and through the usual methods.

October 11, 2019


WIP GAP: Today’s the Day


Today is the de facto date for progress reports, so you have been asked to complete a work-in-progress grade abatement profile score report — what you now should recognize as a WIP GAP report. The guide to these scores is available here:

WIP GAP Explained

The form you must fill out is available here: https://forms.gle/FM5aZbDR8Stgfk6v8. You’ll need to be signed into your Brewster account to access it. What you’ll find is a stripped-down version of the formal GAP report.

As always, this kind of self-assessment requires you to weigh evidence honestly and objectively. It is “collective human judgment informed by evidence,” as Tony Wagner calls it: a collaborative effort to validate your progress, hold you accountable for any missteps, and give you direction moving forward.

You can mark the assignment on Google Classroom as done when you’ve completed the report. Alternatively, you can create a document there to start a discussion about your progress. That is strongly encouraged! The more you invest, the more successful you will be.

In fact, you are also strongly encouraged to ask questions here, in the comment section of this post, about your progress. Those questions will benefit others, and what benefits them will also help you.

It might be most helpful to read some of the testimonials about this makerspace that are available online:

This makerspace approach to your learning is highly effective for 95% of students, but 100% is more than possible. If you find yourself in that 5%, start a discussion. Ask questions. Invest in the space, and it will pay off, because it always does.

Remember that a lack of communication and honesty is what kills any relationship. Your integrity is as much a part of your learning profile as any other skill or trait.

October 8, 2019


In-Class Focus and the Dunning-Kruger Effect


TL;DR

Often, you believe you are on-task and focused when you are not. You believe that you are using the resources of the space effectively, but you are not. This is the Dunning-Kruger effect applied to self-awareness and self-regulation.

In other words, you believe you are focused because you don’t know what focus feels like. You have to experience what it’s like to focus your entire self-selected group of friends on one task for a period to know what that feels like. You have to avoid social media for 30 minutes straight with the phone right next to you to know what that feels like.

You’ve had the phone taken away, or been told it has to be off. You’ve been silenced in class. But those are not choices. Your brain does not process them as choices; each one is filtered through your knowledge that it was not a choice that you made.

Practicing What It Feels Like, Then

Yesterday, you were given an assignment: to read the following post in class.

Well, Why Read?

Today, October 8, you’ve been given the class period to write a response. This helps you to

  1. work on the habit of reading these posts, which form the foundation of a flipped classroom; and
  2. work on your in-class focus and use of feedback, which are the foundations of your learning.

There is always more to do in here, which is why “a desire to do more than just what is required” is part of the criteria for a GAP score of 8. Case in point:

Overview: Discussion Hubs

These hubs address essential elements of your learning, not just your work in this makerspace. You can always ask questions and have discussions there. Today, for instance, you will be given a brief in-class lecture on this:

Ongoing Discussion: Dunning-Kruger Effects and Imposter Syndromes

Find time to read that post. Watch the video on the Dunning-Kruger effect. Look at the comments left by other students. We need to target your ability to self-assess. You have to get better at judging your own effort and output.

Here is that post’s first paragraph:

Discrepancies between a student’s self-assessment and their actual performance are common. It’s human nature to struggle with uncomfortable truths, and perhaps the most uncomfortable kind of truth is that we are not as skilled or knowledgeable as we thought. In fact, this phenomenon, known as the Dunning-Kruger effect, happens for almost all of us at some point in our lives.

This is why internalizing the difference between sufficient and insufficient work is critical. The same is true of in-class focus and your use of feedback. It is uncomfortable to realize that you really don’t have the level of self-control and focus you should. You can’t improve without real self-awareness and amenability, though.

In other words, your struggle might be that you don’t know you’re off-task. You believe you’re focused, or just focused enough, for it to count. When someone else — your teacher, most of the time — tells you that you’re off-task, that clashes with what you believe. It’s hard to be self-critical.

I think the reason why is that you haven’t had much experience being focused, truly focused, when the choice is yours to make. You don’t have experience choosing to ignore your phone, for instance; you’ve always been forced to put it away. You have to make that choice yourself for it to have lasting impact.

Because there is always more to do in here, formally and informally, you can always practice being focused in class. You must listen to that uncomfortable feedback, however, that identifies when you aren’t focused.


Summer Reading


The form you should fill out for summer reading is here:

This Google Form, which was posted yesterday to Google Classroom, uses language from the background lessons on reading to get into your summer work. One goal is to make that summer work — really, your choices about that summer work — meaningful beyond the first few weeks of school.

This first form offers a chance for meaningful writing for those who read. It’s about added value; if you are able to answer these prompts, then you will have more evidence of the skills and traits that matter. If you cannot answer these prompts, that will not lower your profile. Instead, you will have a chance next week to add value through a different assignment.

What you write on this form is also powerfully helpful for teachers. It offers insight into BHS’s summer reading, both as a matter of policy and as a part of our study of literature. Be honest. This year is about growth.

I should be able to get a post up about the complete “summer reading” assignment — this is just part of it — tomorrow, when you have a day off. In the meantime, ask questions about any of this in the space below.

October 3, 2019


Here Today, Gone Tomorrow


Work-in-progress grade abatement profiles scores were posted exactly 24 hours ago:

October 2, 2019

These scores, which were explained in even greater detail elsewhere, will be deleted from the online gradebook tomorrow morning. They’ve served their purpose: You’ve seen what your hard work or lack of work will lead to, and you know what to do between now and October 22, when a permanent GAP score will be determined.

Deleting these scores does not delete evidence. Keeping them, however, would require constant updates to the profile, since you would constantly produce new evidence. You might make better choices. You might make worse ones. To constantly update the score would replace one vector for toxicity with another. Consider that idea — of vectors in grading — here:

Clarifying Grade Abatement

Read that carefully. Then consider this: If we are constantly gathering data on you, your GAP score is not summative — it is, instead, about communicating progress to other stakeholders, holding you accountable for your choices, and offering a soft reboot of the evidence-gathering process. Those goals separate the formal GAP scores it from the Skinner-box shock of a WIP GAP score.

There are plenty of places on this website that delve into this stuff (here’s one on using spreadsheet data), but you really just need Alfie Kohn’s logic:

It’s not enough to disseminate grades more efficiently — for example, by posting them on-line. There is a growing technology, as the late Gerald Bracey once remarked, “that permits us to do in nanoseconds things that we shouldn’t be doing at all” (quoted in Mathews, 2006). In fact, posting grades on-line is a significant step backward because it enhances the salience of those grades and therefore their destructive effects on learning.

That’s from “The Case Against Grades,” which you should read in full. Those WIP GAP scores will be removed to put us back on the triptych model of assessment, with a focus on profiles and evidence-gathering. The lesson of those scores, however, ought to stay with you.

Ask questions about this below.

October 2, 2019

Note: Use the comment section at the end of this post to ask questions.


Progress Reports


Your first grades were posted before school on Wednesday, October 2. We will take the class period that day to unpack those scores, process your reaction to them, etc., starting with your Q1B work-in-progress grade abatement profiles:

WIP GAP Explained

Those scores will change, one way or another, between now and October 22, when your Q1B scores are finalized. The extent and direction of that change is up to you.

Here, copied directly from the front page of this instructional site, are the links you need to unpack your scores into actionable stuff1:

For All Stakeholders: A Quick Guide to Stakeholder Involvement
Google Site: Proof of Process: Testimonials, Tours, and Student Work

ESSENTIALS PACK: ASSESSMENT (2019-2020)

*Includes updated, direct links to each period’s GAP report

Start with the “Guide to Stakeholder Involvement.” You haven’t seen that yet, and it will be sent home to parents and guardians today as part of Open House.

The rest of these resources have been distributed and reviewed already. It is your responsibility to use them appropriately to help you be successful in here. Remember that success now corresponds to success next year, when the Skinner-box logic of high school is a memory. That’s why those testimonials are included.


Current Units


Once you understand what these GAP scores are telling you, move on to our two current units of study. From the front page of this site:

CURRENT UNITS OF STUDY (SEPTEMBER/OCTOBER)

① The Age of the Essay | Study of how and why we write. Includes close reading of a central text, guided analysis, and a universal writing process.
② What Is Literature For? | Study of how and why we read. Includes close reading of different texts (video, nonfiction), guided analysis, and reader-response writingIncludes summer reading work. 

These are both about the how and why of writing and reading. They frame everything else we’ll do this year. The more work you put in now, the better. Remember the lessons of this post.

The first unit just ended, and you have a writing assignment due on Thursday, October 10. The second unit starts formally on Thursday, October 3, with a closer look at the reading process. If you have kept up with all requirements so far, that’s your focus today:

The Reading Process

You will have an assignment based on the first video in that post, so pay careful attention to it.

Remember to ask questions below.


  1. “Stuff” is used here because it’s imprecise. Some of you will need a one-on-one conference; some need a written plan; others, just a nudge in the right direction.